THE POISON DEITY

So far I've read the first 6 chapters and my review will be based on that. The author first of all is decently skilled - the writing is very clear with little to no grammatical errors and the transitions are super well done!! The story itself has captivated me by this point as my questions begin to mount and I crave answers! I'm totally here for Zhong Peng's journey :) Keep up the good work!

After reading the starting chapters I can say The Poison Deity is a captivating novel that immerses readers in a world of mystery and cultivation. The story follows Zhong Peng on a dangerous journey filled with unexpected revelations. With vivid descriptions, a well-paced narrative, and the introduction of an ancient book and cultivation system, it adds depth and intrigue to the plot. The compelling characters and enticing storyline promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. I can't wait to continue reading The Poison Deity and discover more about its captivating world and intriguing mysteries.

So, I've read the first 8 or so chapters. And I have to say one thing, excellent work. I can feel it, I can smell it, I can see it. My only nitpick is that you sometimes use words that have to be searched in a dictionary, other than that, congratulations, I know how hard it is to keep this type of writing up.

Writing quality is worse than mtl novels.. I just read 2 chapters and dropped.. I'll continue if and when this has been rewritten.

Interesting story thus far. I would appreciate if the author can improve some grammar and small things, like having names capitalized when used. Other than that, the novel has good potential. Good luck!

It is a cultivation story with intricate plot and intriguing story. You won't waste your time reading this because it's immediately grip you at the start. Please, keep up the good work, Author!

from reading this story I can tell how much you put into this novel and the more I read the more I want more please continue writing

The author has clearly put a lot of thought into this story. I appreciate the attention to world building, mystery, and suspense. I don't normally read cultivation stories, but overall the writing leaves me wanting to know more about this world. I hope the author continues to update this story.

This review is based on the first three chapters as I believe these three are the "make or break" of any story. WRITING QUALITY: The grammar is okay. It was easy to understand but there were some random "deep words" here and there. The paragraph were also kinda long to my liking. I have the attention span of a goldfish that's why. PS. Your dialogue could be better. STABILITY OF UPDATES: Quite consistent, I guess. I checked the table of contents and found out the author started uploading six months ago. Sixty chapters in and three days continuous writing. STORY DEVELOPMENT: [spoilers] A lot have happened during the first three chaps. Some burly dude tryna bully him, he found a peculiar box, picked it up, it turned into a book after it drank some of his blood, then viola, transmigration. The pace was alright in my opinion. CHARACTER DESIGN: Could definitely do some work to be honest. WORLD BACKGROUND: Not much was told.

The concept is overall nice, but there are problems with typos and grammars here and there, the writer is extremely hardworking, because the writing style is very very very great. You travel inside the novel with just few lines, enough to get hooked.

The story itself has the potential to be great! The only problem with it is the inconsistent updates and the writing quality.[img=recommend]

The author is really good, I don’t like reading cultivation books but I stick to this one

Alright, this is just mind blowing, to be honest, at first when I saw it was a cultivation novel, I was like having doubts about how it would turn out to be... But men, I can believe I would actually love something like this, I mean, c'mon this book is literally amazing, I love the fact that the chapters are many, it would make it a lot easier to dive deeper into the story... I really do can't wait to binge reading this... I love the suspense and the characters are really simply relatable .. overall, this book is simply awesome 👌👌

I'm not into cultivations novels because sometimes they overcomplicated stuff, but this was it was easy to read and with a really good plot. Some typos here and there, but it did not hinder the writing quality. Good job, author!!! Keep up the work 👍💕💕