Star Wars: Rise of the forgotten clan

A start to an amazing fanfic. Not many star wars fanfics, even less that are decent or havent been dropped. im happy to say this Gem doesn't fall in that category. I love the MC so far and the development of the story. its still coming together, the bigger picture of this story, and where it'll head but still worthy of a 5 star rating at this point. Keep up the good work.

very short Chapter Mci is the lame "i want to protect everyone" of course with dead Family its not hard to find something better

So author deleted all the lower and mir star reviews and kept all high ones tp boost rating. Even if low star is deserved. Kinda pathetic. Ig you jabe to resort to that then maybe tru and do better instead of tricking people. Story went no where is mostly canon af amd mc stays kid forever

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Mostly what want to say about this story is that it's mostly just copy and paste of Star Wars with the addition of the MC. There are some parts/chapters that are original, but the amount pales in comparison to the copy-paste chapters. That and the fact that random girls are being thrown in almost every chapter just for "harems" sake. Overall it's a cool idea but not well executed. I hope that in the future it could get better, and it's not to the point I'm averse to the story, but it's just not what I was looking for in a Star Wars fanfiction.

I mean it’s alright.

just a copy an paste of star wars, there is no development

nice story don't stop what you are doing and don't list what they say to you

I gave you a 5 star in all review because you deserve it. your story is great it is one of the best star wars novels i have read in a long time.THANK YOU ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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This is a good story please continue and don't drop, I love how you portray Ren I hope he uses the force more to his advantage and when is he going to have his own lightsaber?

not bad so far. grammar is ok, so that's a plus, but we do seem to have a cliche moment a female is pyshed into the story. just seems like a nieve kids raised by robots. works have been great until the author forced the girl into it and he didn't even turn in the criminal for bounty or sell the ship...

Rating this as of 10 chapters, love the story so far. like the concept alot, hope the other keeps up the updates and good work 👍🏼