Hollywood What If

MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.

Keep it up. Nice Work man. Write more chapters so your novel can be found in the fan fiction section. I think it is going to be a great story.

So far so good. Tbh it's too early to judge but it does have a lot of potential.

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So far so good, u could add more behind the scenes craftbuilding, like Hollywood king, btw u could change genre to movie for more views, Hope u continue to update this novel 😊

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

My first review. This story is really good. In it, the Protagonist really goes through the hard way to make a good film. This is also not about dependence on the system because it does not exist.The man just returned to the Past and works on films himself without anyone's help. One of my favorite works at the moment. If something is written by a translator because it is weak in English (

This is one of the better Hollywood novels , but for me it has quite slow pacing.I hope that author will add extra things related to Hollywood except movie making like creating netflix or other Money making things.

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good novel man just keep writing it and give us more chapters

When Are you going to Upload New Chapters Author.

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.

A great story keep it up, my ony complaint is that it doesnt have more than 100 fhapters.