Hollywood What If

MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.

Keep it up. Nice Work man. Write more chapters so your novel can be found in the fan fiction section. I think it is going to be a great story.

AUTHOR THIS NOVEL IS FUN, IF IT WAS NOT FUN WHY THESE MORONS ARE HERE. LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN HI AND ANGELINA JOLIE..SHE NEEDS TO BE CERTER WIFE FOR MC AND THIS NOVLE CAN GO FART 3000 CHAPTERS IF YOU DO NOT QUIT. CMON THIS IS FUN NO BS THANK YOU.

My first review. This story is really good. In it, the Protagonist really goes through the hard way to make a good film. This is also not about dependence on the system because it does not exist.The man just returned to the Past and works on films himself without anyone's help. One of my favorite works at the moment. If something is written by a translator because it is weak in English (

Brilliant. What makes a story good? The grammar and it's pacing and you've written both very well. I love what you're doing with the story and can't wait to see where this goes.

This has potential. Continue.

👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🤩great novel far better than any Hollywood fanfiction out there if u r in search of Hollywood fanfiction this is very good 👍👍😊😊

worth the ride .keep it up and plz don't drop and need more chapters

great story 👏.flow of the story is good , protagonist is also showing visible growth, and it's fun to read this

I love this , I would have read the 120 chapters ahead on patreon if I wasn't broke🥹rooting for Kazir X Erica Mandez

It's a good book. I enjoyed reading it and wish that I could read more. I'm not good with words, but all I can say is that to those who would stumbled upon this book, I recommend that you would give this book a try. I promised it would be worth your time.

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otima historia ,gostei muito da parte da cosntrução do universo ,o autor poderia adicionar nesse universo a parte dos filmes de ação que envolve mulheres ,como atomic ,anne ,entre outros para ter um constraste maior e poder diversificar mais ainda a historia ,obg pela historia

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