I regressed and became the Sword Ice King

Good day Readers. After completing the first volume of my novel, this author has finally decided to rate his own book. I don't have much to say but I can say as much (if you get what I mean....probably not😅). Anyways. I'll kick off with World Building. Honestly, I didnt have hope for this particular novel since my past few years of constant failures🥲. But the increased interest in the book had urged me to build it up properly. It's set in medieval times, but there will be a mix of modern days. After all, there is a whole family of tech amongst them. It's a mix of fantasy and system, where only a specific set of people have been excluded from the system. Is it a curse or a blessing? One could say it limits humans but others would disagree. Well, I'm interested to find out which is the case for Raph. As you continue reading this novel, you'll get to explore a lot more. I mixed it a lot of elements and hopefully it comes out in a beautiful blend.....and not a catastrophe. The story starts slow, but the constant effort I've made Raph go through to attain strength has been all worth it. I noticed along the way, how some certain things may not add up. I want to encourage you to ask questions below this review if interested. Then the Character Development/Design. Well, except for his sisters, we haven't really gotten a whole feel of the Characters yet. I'll bet most people dont actually know who the main leading characters are except for Raph. Would be nice to hear what you think though. Further growth and description of each significant character will be portrayed from volume 2 as well as choosing our final leading characters. Then we move on to Story Development and Writing Quality. My writing quality is average at best as most- okay maybe some authors tend to make little mistakes every now and then . Of course, I will work on this and eventually, my writing quality as well as my sentence structures may become captivating to my Readers. The Story Development should have been easily paced, with a bit of turn and curves every now and then. I kind of think I'm working on that part. A novel that is easily predictable would turn boring at one point , sadly, it's not exactly easy incorporating surprise while keeping an even pace. Expect something good from Volume 2 in that case. Lastly Updating Stability. Well excuse me for being a Med Student, but time is of essence here 😭. Of course, I have been working on a roster to even everything out and hopefully, it will play out as I want it to. In general, Raph, his family bond as well as the friends, and relationships in the future has potential. I hope you stick around to read that potential bloom. Hah! No Harem. We won't know who his love interest is for a while, but steamy stuff from after they find each other....probably. Expect the unexpected if you can. ...(men of culture🤔) scenarios are still in consideration. But in all, Thank you readers for having the time to read this Authors work and I hope you stick around to the end.

Reveal Spoiler

This novel has great potential, but there’s a glaring issue with the world-building regarding the knight household. A noble family of that caliber, led by an 11-star knight and with centuries of history, should logically have secret guardian knights bound by oaths or magic to ensure loyalty and protect the family. The lack of proper guards or defenses during major events feels unrealistic, especially for a household of their stature. Moreover, relying on an outsider to teach the MC seems odd when the family should be full of capable knights and trainers. These points undermine the credibility of the noble family and their legacy. I hope the author addresses these aspects to make the story feel more consistent and immersive.

You got something here keep I hope you don’t drop it

Cant edit his chapters. Plot holes. Added a harem after leading ua to believe there wouldn’t be one. Mediocre novel and author.

Definitely a unique story, I am pleasantly surprised by this. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is eye-catching and doesn’t feel rushed. Will keep reading more.

el prota is un inútil, con toda la información no hace nada y hay inconsistencias como, el no sabe las verdades habilidades de sus hermanas o de los asesinos y eso ya lo vivió

It has an impressive start, the world building is good and I like how it slowly develops instead of having info dumps about it. The only issue I have is the writing, I'll advise the author to use grammarly for editing it'll help improve his work by leaps and bounds and also reduce the use of '....'. It surely has it charms and I like how the story slowly unravels as you move on. More power to the author. I wish you the best 👍

Definitely an interesting and unique story... I hope it gets more attention from the readers... Continue writing and uploading more chapters, author.

the one and only critique I have about this book is the amount of time out of MC's POV. some people like that.I don't. that's my personal opinion, but don't let me dissuade you from reading this novel. please read it for yourself. you won't regret investing your time into this book.

Woah it’s like Im watching a movie but with words I’m dumbfounded at this descriptive and creative story please keep going i apperciate you

The story is pretty good, even though there are a lot of inconsistencies, but the fights... oh my god, the fights are unbearable. I feel like I'm in Dragon Ball Z they last way too long, and, most of all, they just won't stop talking, which gets annoying really quickly. You can particularly see it in the 12 Great Family competition.

Man I really enjoyed the first 39 chapters too bad i don’t have money to pay for the rest but it’s a good novel

I read a lot of regression stories, and I like yours. The author can explain the concept of power well in this novel. Also, the pace is good, I can understand it easily.