Samba lost her mother when she was a child. Her father, Mr. Jack, remarried a woman named Angelina.
Angelina had a daughter named Joy and was jealous of Samba, who was more brilliant than her own daughter.
When Mr. Jack traveled abroad, Angelina began to mistreat Samba out of jealousy and hatred.
Samba endured the mistreatment until she could no longer bear it and ran away from home.
She eventually met a woman who helped her find a job so she could earn some money.
Samba worked as a housemaid in Mr. Williams' house. She was honest with them, and when Mr. and Mrs. Williams realized her honesty, they began to treat her like their own child.
One day, Mr. Williams received a termination letter from work, and the manager told him he needed to bring 500,000 naira to get his job back.
Mr. Williams was broke and didn't have that amount. He turned to his wife, but she also didn't have the money.
When Samba heard about it, she offered to help and gave him the money she had saved from her annual payments.
In gratitude, Mr. and Mrs. Williams decided to send Samba to university, where she excelled and graduated with flying colors. She later married a CEO and became the second-in-command of the company.
Find out how Samba was later found by her family when she became rich.
The concept is nice actually Just work on your writing technique I also forget to proof read but make it a habit
I feel you have a good story, actually an amazing story to tell. If only you can improve on your grammar as well as proof read your word before publishing, it will go a long way to enhancing readers enjoyment.