Mark of the Multiversal Pretender
Leo was a Great Pretender or a con-artist for those who don't know what Pretender means.
Anyways, he's been an official full time Pretender, tricking anyone especially tourists for their money.
He pretended to be a beggar who lost his child due to a fire and in need of some money even though he's still 20 and hasn't even experienced having a girlfriend.
He also Pretended to be a police officer who extorts naughty teenagers when he saw them vandalizing with spray paints, by letting them go only if they gave him their cash.
He even pretended to be a rich but fearsome mafia who extorted money from an old couple. Though he soon gave their money back to them after realizing that the money he extorted was supposed to be used on their granddaughter who suffers from cancer.
So he would like to call himself a Kind Con-Artist.
Then why did he reincarnate in some kind of weird world dominated by animals who talk and act like humans?
Did he also tell you that he gained a system that made him a true Great Pretender in the entire Multiverse?
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[My fifth fanfic!]
[Harem!!]
[First pairing will be Elsa from Frozen]
[Chosen Worlds:
- Kung Fu Panda
- Frozen
- Hotel Transylvania
- The Incredibles
- Megamind
- Rise of the Guardians
- Wall-E
- Moana
- Wreck-it Ralph
- Monster's Inc
- Next Gen
- Despicable Me / Minions (Bababa baba banana!)
- Monster House
- There will be more if it can fit on the fic
The schedule will be Monday to Friday.
[I don’t own anything except for my own character]
- You can join my Patreon - Patreon.com/SlimeSage
- You can also join my Discord to discuss about the fanfic and see the illustrations- https://discord.gg/ukcjkM8fNt
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What can I say? Only an idiot would not rate his own fanfic for 5 stars whether it is good or not.
WHAT IS BRO GONNA DO IN WALL-E TELL ME.
I hope he doesn’t give Helen Parr a stealth abortion this time
It felt too much like a mid-tier Chinese translation I couldn't keep going. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
I think the author is forgetting the backstory of the main character because his personality is moving further and further away from that of the great pretender and turning into a typical beta anime protagonist
Meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I really like the story, but knowing your previous work, I'm afraid that the protagonist likes furries. If that time comes, I will stop reading it. One more thing, the protagonist is not of African descent, right? I've always imagined him as a white boy with brown hair.
It seems interesting to me at least. I'll stock up some chapters for now and hopefully, this will be different than the other story of yours author goodluck! Anyway here's a random meme of mine
It's worth giving it a chance, since in my opinion the fanfic will cover the "Disney" universe in depth compared to other fanfics in that you only go through that world once, complete the quest and then leave. so try darma chane it's worth it.
for now, because I like the old story. and this is a re-write, hopefully it's better. read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters , Lame
It is seen that he put effort into the work and that is why he fails. The introduction (chapter 20) is very slow, it is summarized in training to obey the system and some talks that are not interesting at all, he obtains the ability to travel between worlds and returns to train again, now being an extra behind the protagonist. . You give a lot of weight to the boring plots and the system, it basically carries the entire plot.
Writing Quality is pretty good, author pays attention to detail and he also makes sure there are no typos, there will be a few here and there though but nothing major. Great and Stable updates. Development is at a pretty nice pace right now, I have no complaints. World Backround is pretty good too, overall this is a great read, check it out!
i have to change the review , this story started out strong but right now it seems like we are crawling forward , it became boring and incredibly slow
Mark of the Multiversal Idiot more like Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Awesome Story Development ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay Character Design ⭐ - horrible or negative World Background ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay The more you read the more stupid story gets. At the beginning it was normal but the more you read more it hurts.