conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
9 months ago
32
wisdomseeker
5 stars because why not? Even though sometimes Danzo can be annoying
10 months ago
26
plotplanner
😃
10 months ago
13
Kinggito_Sama
All though the powerscaling is a bit off. The story itself is pretty good 😃
9 months ago
12
Swikong
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read.
Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey.
🙏
10 months ago
8
DreamsDieOneDay
if in a story there is the Mihawk or something like his model, you can be sure that the story will be a blast lol good's chapter 10/10 ✡🎗☤❄
10 months ago
6
Rinchan7
Overused idea but written well so far, I really like the story as of chapter 9, will definitely want more. 5 stars
10 months ago
4
pingpongddads
Good start for now, lets see where this goes
10 months ago
3
Zero_4296
I love the way the plot is right now so I want to see where this goes and see if it stays as good as it is because some fanfictions start to go down hill so I hope it stays this quality if so I'll read it till the end.
10 months ago
3
Samp23
the author seems to be eliminating the low reviews, because if not I can't explain how this fic has a high rating, I wouldn't say that this fic is complete garbage but it is very bad, this fic is so Chinese that Fan Yuan is claiming his nationality when he sees that this mc surpasses him, also the personality of the characters is not correct and the author does not seem to know much about the work of Naruto
25 days ago
2
DiabloRedfox
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
5 months ago
2
LeonardoDiCaprio1
you are doing good job author with the book it's good see a different approach on this topic
10 months ago
2
DarkCrow10
Horrible. Simply horrible. Author has no idea about Naruto world. Most of situations and conversations does not make sense. Characters knows things they should not and there is no explanation whatsoever. Power levels are all over the place and Naruto timeline is all cooked. Bad story period!
conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
5 stars because why not? Even though sometimes Danzo can be annoying
😃
All though the powerscaling is a bit off. The story itself is pretty good 😃
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read. Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey. 🙏
if in a story there is the Mihawk or something like his model, you can be sure that the story will be a blast lol good's chapter 10/10 ✡🎗☤❄
Overused idea but written well so far, I really like the story as of chapter 9, will definitely want more. 5 stars
Good start for now, lets see where this goes
I love the way the plot is right now so I want to see where this goes and see if it stays as good as it is because some fanfictions start to go down hill so I hope it stays this quality if so I'll read it till the end.
the author seems to be eliminating the low reviews, because if not I can't explain how this fic has a high rating, I wouldn't say that this fic is complete garbage but it is very bad, this fic is so Chinese that Fan Yuan is claiming his nationality when he sees that this mc surpasses him, also the personality of the characters is not correct and the author does not seem to know much about the work of Naruto
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
you are doing good job author with the book it's good see a different approach on this topic
Horrible. Simply horrible. Author has no idea about Naruto world. Most of situations and conversations does not make sense. Characters knows things they should not and there is no explanation whatsoever. Power levels are all over the place and Naruto timeline is all cooked. Bad story period!
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very good story and development of the storyline