conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
5 months ago
25
wisdomseeker
5 stars because why not? Even though sometimes Danzo can be annoying
5 months ago
24
Kinggito_Sama
All though the powerscaling is a bit off. The story itself is pretty good 😃
5 months ago
12
plotplanner
😃
6 months ago
11
Swikong
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read.
Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey.
🙏
5 months ago
7
Lord_YujiroHanma
if in a story there is the Mihawk or something like his model, you can be sure that the story will be a blast lol good's chapter 10/10 ✡🎗☤❄
6 months ago
5
Rinchan7
Overused idea but written well so far, I really like the story as of chapter 9, will definitely want more. 5 stars
6 months ago
4
pingpongddads
Good start for now, lets see where this goes
6 months ago
3
Zero_4296
I love the way the plot is right now so I want to see where this goes and see if it stays as good as it is because some fanfictions start to go down hill so I hope it stays this quality if so I'll read it till the end.
6 months ago
3
DiabloRedfox
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
19 days ago
2
LeonardoDiCaprio1
you are doing good job author with the book it's good see a different approach on this topic
5 months ago
2
Gd_Sys
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
6 months ago
2
Digambar_Fund_2663
very good story and development of the storyline
4 months ago
1
Haughty_master
its honestly fun to read op and naruto fans arguing about the power system lol anyway honestly its good ill recommend to read this and read the comments of all paragraph lol i laughed so hard
4 months ago
1
GlacticWolf
Everything was good... The only downside was actually my knowledge of the Naruto world. so it was hard to catch up on who the nation,characters,and powers were. I had to search it up. so nothing on you, it was just hard to catch up on the story.
conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
5 stars because why not? Even though sometimes Danzo can be annoying
All though the powerscaling is a bit off. The story itself is pretty good 😃
😃
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read. Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey. 🙏
if in a story there is the Mihawk or something like his model, you can be sure that the story will be a blast lol good's chapter 10/10 ✡🎗☤❄
Overused idea but written well so far, I really like the story as of chapter 9, will definitely want more. 5 stars
Good start for now, lets see where this goes
I love the way the plot is right now so I want to see where this goes and see if it stays as good as it is because some fanfictions start to go down hill so I hope it stays this quality if so I'll read it till the end.
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
you are doing good job author with the book it's good see a different approach on this topic
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
very good story and development of the storyline
its honestly fun to read op and naruto fans arguing about the power system lol anyway honestly its good ill recommend to read this and read the comments of all paragraph lol i laughed so hard
Everything was good... The only downside was actually my knowledge of the Naruto world. so it was hard to catch up on who the nation,characters,and powers were. I had to search it up. so nothing on you, it was just hard to catch up on the story.