Lilian laid on his deathbed, his life nearing its end.
Surrounded by the cold quiet of a hospital room, he had spent his last months immersed in novels on his phone.
One novel, in particular, had captured his heart, and he yearned to finish it before succumbing to his incurable disease.
But as the end drew near, he realized he couldn't access the final volume.
Helplessly, he regretted the opportunities he had missed in life.
And death had finally come knocking.
"If only there were another world... that could offer me a second chance," He whispered.
"If only I could live a second life... in a time when I had listened."
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Author here, this is my second premium and official novel! I know I'm not perfect when it comes to writing, plotting, and killing off characters. So pleaseeeee bear with me. I know it's a lot to ask for, but it's my only request I'd ask for you guys as readers. Anyways, I'm sure you've all read a chapter or two of my novel here and I know some of you are curious about what is coming in the future. If there's anything that you can ask, it's only things regarding to the current state of the story because I feel like asking questions about how the 'MCs future (insert question)' might just kill the entire reading experience. But also if you are just gonna ask it anyways, maybe on a good day I could drop a small hint but that will be all (I suppose). Now for the story itself, I kind of found my flow as of chap 60, so I'd say brace yourselves for some good stuff, I have a lot of things planned ahead for the next 300 chapters so I hope you all share the dread and hate you have towards me when something bad happens. But also I'd also like to say I want to explore at least 3 continents in the next 300 chaps so let's hope I somehow get there. Now, this is the end of my shameless author stuff. Please don't be afraid to comment and ask questions regarding this novel, if anything I'd probably reply back 90% of the time. Otherwise if I don't, I'm probably sleeping. Happy reading!
Short Summary: Without intending to offend the author, if you come with high expectations due to the reviews this novel has received, I’m sorry to say you’ll be disappointed. At best, and being generous, it’s a novel to pass the time when you have nothing else to read. Context for those who want an honest review before reading: The word “Extra” in the novel is just there to ride the wave of popularity for the “extra” genre. The MC is treated like the protagonists of typical Japanese or Chinese novels: he’s always in the right place at the right time to meet the main or important characters for the plot. The other characters exist solely for the MC's convenience. For example, the MC’s mother knows he was born with an ultra-OP bloodline and tries to keep it a secret by locking him up for the first five years of his life, changing his hair and eye color with magic so no one discovers his original traits. (This is confusing since later on, one of the heroines has the exact same hair and eye colors as the MC.) But then, the mother suddenly lets him go out and explore, leaving him with a caretaker who conveniently allows him to wander off to exactly where he needs to be to meet one of the novel’s main characters—who just so happens to be his age so they can become friends. In the end, the same overprotective mother inexplicably lets the MC travel with his new friend and his friend’s caretaker, even though there’s no reason for her to trust them after just a few days of knowing them. But this setup was necessary so the MC could be in the right place at the right time to meet another main character and save her. Even if you try to overlook these plot devices as necessary for the story to progress, some scenes take this to such an extreme that it’s impossible to ignore. For instance, (keeping in mind that the power system is broken—5- to 6-year-old children are stronger than experienced mercenaries or zone-boss monsters, but let’s ignore that since a character can be as overpowered as the author wants) one of the main female heroines was just passing through the MC’s remote village. Her carriage conveniently breaks down right in front of where the MC is. The MC ends up helping the blacksmith repair the carriage. The FL (female lead) is accompanied by the strongest human of the current era as her bodyguard, yet for no reason, he vanishes, leaving the MC alone to repair the carriage. This leads to the MC entering the carriage and talking to the FL. After a while, the bodyguard returns and attacks the MC, but the MC (a 5-year-old) easily dodges the attack. The bodyguard justifies this by saying he attacked because the MC was inside the carriage and might be an enemy. Seriously, if he were an enemy, the FL would’ve been dead 100 times over before anyone noticed. In another instance, the MC and his friend sneak out of their room, even though their caretaker—a supposedly powerful bodyguard for a prince—is asleep nearby and fails to notice two 5- and 6-year-olds escaping through a window just a few meters away. The MC sneaks out to save his friend, who decides to do something foolish by trying to rescue some slaves. Instead of waking the caretaker, who could easily handle the situation, the MC goes alone because, of course, he’s the all-powerful MC who can handle everything. Conveniently, another FL happens to be enslaved, and naturally, it’s more dramatic for the MC to save her. In yet another instance, the MC’s friend and another FL, both 5 or 6 years old, free some slaves by incapacitating a group of guards. After they succeed, the boss of the guards arrives, summons his personal guards to deal with the kids, and then complains about how much he lost because of them. Like, WTF, dude, you let them do it, so why are you complaining? But all of this was just to buy time for the MC to arrive and save the day at the last moment. It’s as if the characters lose all sense of logic just to make the MC look good.
Honestly, this author is really good and puts in a lot of effort and detail into each chapter of his novels. You won’t find many faults when it comes to plot, character development and what not. Give this novel a chance, I say that with 100% confidence.
Honestly I am hooked. The story maintains a very good balance. The mc did not become an underdog that would receive insults and contempt from people neither did he become an overpowered entity overnight. The pacing of the story is not too fast and also not too slow and most importantly I can perfectly understand what is happening. It deserves the 5 stars rating. Urgently waiting for more chapters!
The way author write POVs of different situations and people is really good and how the scenes are portrayed the description of world everything is well sought even im gonna take some pointers from the way you write, as i have a habit of adding too much details in plot need to trim it down a lil i think. Read it until 5 chaps and the pace history of the story the world building and lastly the naming sense are perfectly written. Hope it continues with more stable releasing.
the story writing is amazing I'm amazed by the author skills I can't wait for the next chapters.
author are you gonna upload today if not then tell me so i won't have to wait for it .......................................................................................
it's a great novel grammar is ideal story is rather new compared to most extra novels though i hope you explain the system properly cause i still don't know what SP does
Books about reincarnation and extras have become so stale and boring, but not this one. Instantly hooked by the fact that Lilian was abandoned simply because he was a people pleaser and then got reincarnated into his favourite novel where he could forge his own path as Julian. I want to know more about him, i want him to grow stronger and eventually interact with the true MC of the novel. Because of that, I'm gonna stay and see where this goes. 100/10🔥
The author has done a great job feeding us with a captivating storyline and magnetic chapters that just draw you in. I am giving you a massive five stars for a job well done; please continue to update!
You can see the effort poured into this book, the excellent writing, the intriguing characters, the mysteries, the pacing, and the world-building... don't get me started on that, it's really astounding!! Nothing is better than a well-thought-out world! That was great!👌
A huge huge potential one if this is developed correctly. The world is enough to indulge in and find out more. please provide adequate details to keep us hooked. good start! looking forward to it. All the best!
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Very good book I recommend this book hope it is good for you.
the story truly unique than any other reincarnation book I’ve read. it has so much potential, keep up the good work author!