My Elf System

My Elf System

Fantasy222 Chapters2.0M Views
Author: PhoenixAsh
4.34
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Orion was on his way back home from work.



He was hurrying back home to take a nap while planning how he would spend his weekend as well, but while he was lost in thought, a truck suddenly appeared out of nowhere and the last thing he remembered was the truck barreling towards him before everything around him turned dark.



However to his surprise, he didn’t feel any pain after having the accident. In fact, he couldn’t see anything.



Everything around him seemed dark but when he opened his mouth to speak, he heard the gurgling sounds of a baby.



Noticing that the one sounding like a baby was him, Orion tried to open his eyes to know exactly where he was, but when he did, the first thing his eyes fell upon was a stunning beautiful elf, holding him with the most tenderest of care.



Not only was she his mother, she was also a queen as well and she had a beautiful sister who adored him just as much as his mother.



Aside from this, Orion also noticed he had received a system which allowed him to grow and evolve faster than a normal High Elf but after finding out the huge role his mother played in eradicating the war between all races, Orion vowed to live a happy and fulfilling life with his mother, aunt and a few others he cared a lot about.

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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

5 months ago
36
Wrathdg
Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

4 months ago
17
Valyrxa
Valyrxa

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

5 months ago
17
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

5 months ago
16
Aayann_
Aayann_

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

5 months ago
13
ULTIMATE_BEING
ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

a month ago
6
Noguenko
Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

a month ago
5
Jordzfml_7
Jordzfml_7

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

4 months ago
5
Haruto17
Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

2 months ago
4
Yueliang_Haizi
Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

3 months ago
4
PizzaDeliveryGuy
PizzaDeliveryGuy

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

a month ago
3
Yassine_0928
Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

2 months ago
3
Rishav_Yadav_8247
Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

2 months ago
3
Sathish_Annarapu
Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

4 months ago
2
Angelic_Throne80
Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

4 months ago
2