Reincarnation Of A Swordsman: The Omni Mage
Born into a world that had just discovered Qi, and learnt the art of cultivation; Kyle Lin becomes the youngest swordmaster at just the age of 15.
When chaos descends on his world, Kyle and other brave ones face their first real threat since obtaining power.
"But, it wasn't that simple..."
By the time humanity had almost won against the Qi beasts; Kyle is killed by a mysterious artifact that descended from the sky at a blinding speed.
That didn't spell the end of his story, it was just the beginning...
[Reincarnation in the process...]
[Reincarnation successful!]
[Welcome to Zekkoa!]
Kyle finds himself in a new world, inhabited by humans just like his former, but here, they use magic... and are far stronger and more experienced in their power system than his former.
Whereas everyone could awaken with one or two elemental affinity, Kyle awakens with the potential of mastering all—an Omni Mage.
He also combines his elemental mastery with his knowledge as a swordmaster. Dominating and growing faster than ever, Kyle doesn't resign to his new fate. He steels himself to find out the actual reason for his reincarnation and free himself from becoming a pawn.
"I'll never let anyone control me again!"
[WSA 2024 Entry]
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Cover credits: MAXandMILLS, contracted author of "My Formula 1 System."
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Started off really well! Didn’t see many grammar errors, and I love the story so far!! Keep it up author 👍🏼
Overall good story, characters are interesting and the introduction was well crafted. I look forward to picking it up again in a few weeks!
effortless 5 stars. wonderful premise with a one of a kind MC. You've made a masterpiece dear author.
I am going to divide my rating into different sections and I am going to be transparent Writing quality Not many words but it's almost perfect, there are minor errors here and there but it's really good...as I said not many words Story development it is severely lacking in terms of exposure but it does have a lot of potential, the flow of the story makes the MC go with the flow as if he's not alive, i would like him to make choices of his own in the future Character Design As i said before the story is too fast, i want to know about the MC and his past life, the true objective of the system , the lives of the side characters...i want them to be alive Updating quality i simply wish there were more chapters the story is pretty good World building it is severely lacking at least for me, continents, rulers , destruction , Gods , ancestors , enemies e.t.c , The academy arc felt rushed to me because he could've developed mentally first but you do you Conclusion The story is not unique but it's not generic in any way, the MC slightly feels like an NPC since he doesn't have many monologues or internal thoughts and the side characters could've more exposure so i can connect with them The story has potential no... immense potential to grow, the author may be a newbie but she/he/they/them is/are doing very well just improve the flow and look it from a perspective of a reader, I am adding this to my collections and I am looking forward to your future works cause i can see that this is your learning curve...i am sorry if i was brutal or offensive
You started off well, with the character introduction
This is definitely one of my favorite books to ever read an all time fav hope it gets to a 1000 chapters
Overall it's nice the character intro was good I love it I'm adding this to my collection
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Very interesting. Writing Quality Improves with every chapter. Please update faster [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is my first time reviewing on story events idk, anyway. I like the story it has a huge potential. The only thing that it's lacking is character development and world building. I know it's a lil bit pressure writing something but take your time and don't rush no need to rush. I'm looking forward for this story hope you have a great day[img=recommend]
Very good story, with very little error on grammar. Tho my immersion got broken when the god elysia suddenly pop out of nowhere, ridiculing him for suppose humanity survival depend on him, as far as i read they didnt even give him any support or explanation what to do they just decided to drop a meteor?(system) on him and killed him drop him on other world. it just didnt make any sense to me. Aside from this its pretty good overall, Keep up the goodwork!
love your work. just started reading it already a fan.
The first cultivation book that I'm gonna read that doesn't have a blindly arrogant MC