Master Of My Universe: The Author Who Became the Hero's System
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Mark Eisner is the greatest example of a failure. Unable to get his dream job, he resorts to writing a story, a story close to his heart, a story in which he expressed himself to the fullest. It was the delusional universe he created for himself.
Unable to grasp the attention of readers, his book was deemed a failure as well.
Heartbroken after suffering his crushing fate, Mark commits suicide, uttering his last words; proclaiming the end of his story.
But was this the end of his story?
Hell Nah!
He is far from being dead.
He finds himself, astonishingly, still possessing his consciousness, even though his existence is formless.
What he then sees is unbelievable.
The hero he created, the hero "he only" loved, the hero that reflected himself... His own protagonist.
Reincarnated as the system of the hero of his own novel, Mark undergoes an epic journey with his unanticipated creation, helping him throughout, knowing all about his predicaments. There are a few rules to him -
1. RELAY ONLY REQUIRED MESSAGE TO THE PLAYER
2. DROP DESIGNATED REWARDS
3. EXPEL THE PLAYER IF PLAUSIBILITY REACHES LIMITS
But.... Is that all? Does he really thinks events will take place just as he layed them?
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Is he really that Omniscient ? Is he the only one....
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Amazing book, the first chapter would keep you hooked to the plot. the story development is really good and there's never a dull moment. great work author ♥️
the story is good overall, if you want something classic I highly recommend it. the author put a lot of time into this book, and it's clear. Just needs more substance in the world building department. 10/10 will continue to read, and good luck to the author.
this is so good and intresting how can a human write this fantastic novel howw?
It's a good read so far; the world background is still a bit vague, but maybe it is due to me still being in the early chapters. Story development is well-paced, but writer, you have to increase updating stability. Except for that, this is a story that has potential if properly written.
So... following the traditional custom all authors follow, I'm reviewing my own goddamn book. And a 5 star at that(don't want my rating going down). So, if you, my guy, want an MC, who is SMART, SMARTER THAN YOUR PHYSICS TEACHER, who tackles enemies with his brain and magical power, you stumbled upon the right place. Remirg Kryptos is a man of culture and you will obviously raise your eyebrows in disappointment when you read about his uncanny decisions. Simple though they seem. THE OTHER MC, WHO AS USUAL, is a broken guy reincarnated in another world... knows everything blah blah blah... Now I won't spit everything out, so go and read the goddamn book!
I'd say that the pacing is too slow and everything is very unnecessarily detailed. But as it is a fantasy novel it's a good trait. I would say I would like to give the novel a chance and see how the story goes.
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The start of this novel is interesting which hooked me in but it might be considered slow for some people...but for me it's fine. The system/simulator is an interesting take on the rpg genre...I know many books who had started but not able to execute the premise well...but till now the book is going OK so far by keeping everything in balance. Hope the author continues writing the story and not give up.
A very good novel. I would recommend it to everyone.
Personally, I liked the prologue wayyy better than the actual story. [Sorry Author 😅]. Also I’ll be stealing some parts of the prologue for my own story 😏😊. Anyways, I am no one to judge as I haven’t even read the first few chapter yet. So I’ll just give it 4.5 stars
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍
IT is VERY GOOD...................................................................................................... .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The main characters are interesting from what I've read, the world building shows promise of been extremely deep, and the plot is exciting. All in all, I am very excited to read further!
A good novel. Although the world background is still a bit vague, i liked the concept and im really hoping to get a good plot and a cool mc... in any case... release more chap author...!
This is some good shit bro. The author really cooked.
This truly is... our Mogambo Khush Hua... a lil rushed but got heart