So far the story is interesting, I hope it doesn't turn into catching girls like Pokemon [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
4 months ago
6
Rak
its a great start to a harry potter + multiverse fic. Mc is taken over harry once he dies but its an AU with different verses mixed in including marvel. Till now mc is slowly powering up and has converted hogwarts into a semi divine artifact to help him in his quests ( he got to live but got some fate debts to clear ). Its been good. long chapters . Give it a try
4 months ago
3
Maycon_Henrique_10
Mano a história tá incrível a escrita tá muito boa seria bom se você postasse mais capítulos e realmente não precisa se preocupar com a história para realmente boa acho que o que você poderia melhorar seria a quantidade de palavras se cada capítulo fosse maior seria interessante espero que continue escrevendo sua história é incrível 🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
3 months ago
2
TheAbsolution
So far it's been really good 👍
Hope you keep up the good work
4 months ago
2
moon_pie_99
Shameless five stars ⭐️ review for my own fanfic
😂😂😂😂😂
5 months ago
2
behind_your_sister
so bad 😞 all the time it's bashing of characters and villian syndrome from xinxia novel wasted my lifes's 30 min
19 days ago
1
Airelda
Note to myself: You dropped this because he took over Harry Potters body. Ok, bye!---------------------------------------------------------
a month ago
1
Xander_Paz
Una joya, amigo que bien vas cocinado esto, los primeros capítulos cuesta arrancar pero después de despegar solo sigues subiendo, una verdadera joya. Un gran desarrollo de personaje y la historia es muy buena, no incluyes los personajes de un golpe y te tomas tu tiempo para crear. Buena suerte amigo que gran obra.
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So far the story is interesting, I hope it doesn't turn into catching girls like Pokemon [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
its a great start to a harry potter + multiverse fic. Mc is taken over harry once he dies but its an AU with different verses mixed in including marvel. Till now mc is slowly powering up and has converted hogwarts into a semi divine artifact to help him in his quests ( he got to live but got some fate debts to clear ). Its been good. long chapters . Give it a try
Mano a história tá incrível a escrita tá muito boa seria bom se você postasse mais capítulos e realmente não precisa se preocupar com a história para realmente boa acho que o que você poderia melhorar seria a quantidade de palavras se cada capítulo fosse maior seria interessante espero que continue escrevendo sua história é incrível 🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
So far it's been really good 👍 Hope you keep up the good work
Shameless five stars ⭐️ review for my own fanfic 😂😂😂😂😂
so bad 😞 all the time it's bashing of characters and villian syndrome from xinxia novel wasted my lifes's 30 min
Note to myself: You dropped this because he took over Harry Potters body. Ok, bye!---------------------------------------------------------
Una joya, amigo que bien vas cocinado esto, los primeros capítulos cuesta arrancar pero después de despegar solo sigues subiendo, una verdadera joya. Un gran desarrollo de personaje y la historia es muy buena, no incluyes los personajes de un golpe y te tomas tu tiempo para crear. Buena suerte amigo que gran obra.