Saruyama Kenichi Takes Control (Rewrite)

bro, didn't you say you will continue the original, and if you wrote another, why not in English

I guess I expected much. I thought that this rewrite would actually fix Kenichi's overall character but he is just the same generic nice guy. The only thing pretty much is just some added scenarios overall with no major actual changes. Kenichi is still a boring MC, some characters like Rito are turned into weirdos just to push the girls to the MC and again information is just explained terribly. Thought that the author could finally make a Side MC story in a Harem Work but it just didn't but turn him into the actual MC in a Harem.

You had good writing potential and had dedication, daily high quality uploads for a month wow, you were getting better and better, you could have made it great, but you just chose to quit and be lazy, i came back to see whether any updates but you ended up like those losers who start something but cannot finish, good luck with whatever you end up doing.

Bro, I was right dizzy when I read that because English is mixed up with your native language

As the title says, it is a rewrite of the previous one to fix and solve some parts. I hope it is for the best and that this time it does have an uninterrupted continuation.

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Espero que al menos no cambie demasiado con la primera historia, después de todo me gustaba la anterior y sería una pena que está nueva reescritura no fuera tan buena como la primera, tocará ver y esperar que está al menos sea tan buena como la primera historia

I have read the previous one and I really enjoyed it, but this rewrite is already more likeable. The characters fell more alive and the world fells a bit more wide thanks to the addition of new characters. All in all I look forward to what comes of this story and wish the author good luck Also the main character is really likeable, sure he might seem a little basic sometimes but he is leagues better than most harem protagonists.

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