great story the writing is just a bit choppy feels like it's stuttering
4 months ago
1
Tinashe_Tenga_1671
Expect for the clique bit on the rivalry of families, everything is great👍
4 months ago
1
Loneclown
Nice start to your new book.. good world building and background explanations.. keep up the good work..
4 months ago
1
emmy_lerry
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11 days ago
0
Ashish_Dash_6095
I understand slow development to the story but nah what is this? I am currently on chap 234; the egg isn't cracking. the same old seniors and goldcorp people are attacking. At this point every chapter is the same and I don't even know why I am even reading it. Maybe I am a masochist. 2.8 overall stars are still generous imo.
great story the writing is just a bit choppy feels like it's stuttering
Expect for the clique bit on the rivalry of families, everything is great👍
Nice start to your new book.. good world building and background explanations.. keep up the good work..
Hello, amazing author! I'm a professional book promoter, and I specialize in helping your story shine. I create stunning book covers, fun and engaging book videos, and even interactive game adaptations to truly bring your book to life and make it stand out. If you're interested in giving your book the spotlight it deserves, feel free to DM me on: Instagram: @emmy_lerry01 Telegram: @emmy_lerry01 WhatsApp: +27 60 303 0018 Let’s turn your story into a masterpiece the world won’t forget!
I understand slow development to the story but nah what is this? I am currently on chap 234; the egg isn't cracking. the same old seniors and goldcorp people are attacking. At this point every chapter is the same and I don't even know why I am even reading it. Maybe I am a masochist. 2.8 overall stars are still generous imo.