great story the writing is just a bit choppy feels like it's stuttering
6 months ago
5
Tinashe_Tenga_1671
Expect for the clique bit on the rivalry of families, everything is great👍
6 months ago
2
Trio_9949
Dude, I dug the first hundred chapters, but after that, it's just the same old enemy-of-the-week and the MC magically escaping. The beast taming thing is barely even there anymore!
And side character in story are there for filler words no personality and no development , feel like our mc is only human in that story.
Seriously, either make it about the beasts or change the title, man. And the political stuff... I get you're inspired by real life, but come on! You can't just give some nobody more power than the head of the university! If you're not gonna develop the MC beyond his physique, at least give us some backstory on the egg! And don't even get me started on the cowardly headmaster, the influential families, and the dumbest governor ever. The story's just stuck in a loop. If this is how it's gonna be, I'm out.
( this is diff account then i usually read that one is lost to me , i have read upto 254 chapters )
15 days ago
1
Loneclown
Nice start to your new book.. good world building and background explanations.. keep up the good work..
great story the writing is just a bit choppy feels like it's stuttering
Expect for the clique bit on the rivalry of families, everything is great👍
Dude, I dug the first hundred chapters, but after that, it's just the same old enemy-of-the-week and the MC magically escaping. The beast taming thing is barely even there anymore! And side character in story are there for filler words no personality and no development , feel like our mc is only human in that story. Seriously, either make it about the beasts or change the title, man. And the political stuff... I get you're inspired by real life, but come on! You can't just give some nobody more power than the head of the university! If you're not gonna develop the MC beyond his physique, at least give us some backstory on the egg! And don't even get me started on the cowardly headmaster, the influential families, and the dumbest governor ever. The story's just stuck in a loop. If this is how it's gonna be, I'm out. ( this is diff account then i usually read that one is lost to me , i have read upto 254 chapters )
Nice start to your new book.. good world building and background explanations.. keep up the good work..