Great primordial sin

I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well! I’m a passionate Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art. I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts. I also have been transform a script inspired by your story. Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality, and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart. Further. Feel free to contact me on discord: emily_jamess_ My Twitter ( @EmilyClair_) Hoping for a positive response. Thanks

following along is difficult sentences seem abrupt

is it me or is this hard to read and understand