India: The Legend of Aritra

Thank you guys for your support we cross 50 collections on webnovel, It is my first work it has many flaws but i tried by very best some of the chapter is genarated most of them i will update , i hope you guys give suggestions if needed .

Keep it up bro. It is very good start. There are some problem but overall starts are good try to upload chapter regularly. I recommend this book to everyone

TRY TO READ THE NOVEL IT IS GOOD . FOR ALL THE INDIAN.

Good indian context novel. Start reading for I'm free time.

Typically story with ai have potential but wasted. after reading 41 chapter Disappointed 😔

There are many flaws i am giving you 5* just to encourage you to complete the novel, and we can read a Indian good urban novel. Keep posting the chapters don't drop it.

It is a good novel to read in my free time. A very good initiative for Indian novels.

Just don't elongate some things too much.And make some plots more believable.

Very good novel. Keep it up!!! Boss i hope you publish all the chapter that we wanted to read. Jakaksksoosslkdjffbnfjwowoowowowokwjwjjsjsjdjdjjdjdjjfjfjfjfjfjjwoowkwjjsjdjdjdjfjjdjkwopwpqpqiueheururiimxmzmnxbbxhjalaldjfjurowpq

Top most web novel in Indian novel category 🫨🫨 enjoyed reading ... Background story is excellent Character building is excellent Character engagement is good but could be excellent if you avoid multiple POV in single chapter this could help in avoiding void feeling when reading. .....

first of all there are too many problems in this novel I'm gonna elaborate on these one by one: 1. this novel will make more sense in mc is not a reincarnated person but a normal person with a system. for example he doesn't use his future knowledge at all, all the calculations are done by the system to find the best company to invest in and mc just invest in and same will all the advance formula the system sell mc just buy from it. so i don't know why mc have to be an reincarnated person. 2.in starting chapter it becomes a slow burn slice of life story (quite a few chapters dedicated to mc solving maths and physics formula that are just there as fillers) but when it comes to recruiting employees for his "Empire(which doesn't even establish yet)" he goes to the person in his hoodie and asks him to work for him, and as to why cause he will build a "empire(again)" which will matter in this world and the person agreed like seriously. 3. The most important point- he was a 35 year old middle age working man that regressed to 2008 which makes him a 18 year old now you will think he is a 18 year old with the mental age of 35 years old but no, his mental age is of 18 year old, he doesn't have the emotional maturity of a 35 years old men. 4. many people have noticed this and already commented: "beta simp mc" Yes mc is a simp let me explain- i) a 35 year mentally old man going after a 18 year old girl who he knows that she is a selfish girl who is only with him so that he could help her in study and assignment. and after knowing all this he still hopes that she will not abandon him, like seriously dude why don't you go and just beg her then she might just stay. I don't see any emotional maturity that comes with age and taking responsibility, that's why i suggested that this novel will do much better if mc is not a reincarnated person. p.s: To the author, i am sorry for my harsh words and criticism and i understand that you are a new author and still learning and you will surely become a great author. it's your novel and i have no right to criticize it but it's just my views on your novel which i think may help you in understanding the others prospective so that you can better refine your work. I'm also from india and it's rare to see an Indian writer and i just wanted to support you. my words may sound harsh, but my intention is just to help you. I hope you will not take it the wrong way. wishing you all the best for your future endeavours.

i was just hoping if the update speed can be increased ..so that we can overall enjoy more of this novel....as for the rest of the contents they are raw facts ..and it is one of the best novel in my opinion...

As much as I want to say that every reaction by either politicians of our country or the west is 2d and fictional but they are not...these reactions genuinely feel so real.. something they might really do...

Hello, fellow author. Since you are a newbie writer like me... I will give you a piece of advise-- if you are planning to earn from your book, remove or modify AI content... Webnovel has AI detectors and they will not approve contracts if your work flagged as AI --even for paraphrasing. So, I suggest modify your chapter initial chapters, then use AI detectors to double check your work... But if you are only interested in building traffic first, then you are actually on right track...