After living his entire life in a cramped prison cell, Len died, and was transported to another world at the will of an unknown man. Len awakened before a star, who grants him power that he is unaware of, the manipulation of dead spirits. Abandoned at birth in his new life, Len comes to the realization that the world has given up on him, until he learns of the power he possesses.
It sounds interesting man! But at chapter 1 I got 2 points: Too much stuttering😂 and also mixing up the tenses, but that is not something necessarily bad. To me some just some of the sentences sound weird. Also it might be a bit confusing, but I guess that’ll solve itself when you continue the story. As a starting author myself, I must say that the story’s got potential man, so keep writing.