The story starts off great. I like the powers and the premise, but the story just goes into repeat, and we watch the MC and his allies get there ass beat over and over again. it doesn't stop, and they never get a break to heal before another wave shows up soon after. the MC whines a bit too much, too. I feel like someone like him would have given up already and let himself die. honestly, idk how any folk would want to live after becoming this MC. there has been no light shown at the end of this tunnel except that he needs to fix something in hopes it'll fix him, yet he can't even win 1 fight. reality is in danger, and the only big hitters they got are WW and a GL. Guess reality isn't a priority. overall, it can still turn out to be a good story if the author changes a few things, but right now, it's decent at best.
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Zion_King_1234
Like the story but would be better if characters like Batman and nightwing and whoever else didn’t go around using their real names and actually used their code names.
The story starts off great. I like the powers and the premise, but the story just goes into repeat, and we watch the MC and his allies get there ass beat over and over again. it doesn't stop, and they never get a break to heal before another wave shows up soon after. the MC whines a bit too much, too. I feel like someone like him would have given up already and let himself die. honestly, idk how any folk would want to live after becoming this MC. there has been no light shown at the end of this tunnel except that he needs to fix something in hopes it'll fix him, yet he can't even win 1 fight. reality is in danger, and the only big hitters they got are WW and a GL. Guess reality isn't a priority. overall, it can still turn out to be a good story if the author changes a few things, but right now, it's decent at best.
Like the story but would be better if characters like Batman and nightwing and whoever else didn’t go around using their real names and actually used their code names.
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Never knew that I needed a power rangers and DC crossover fic. Thank you