Writing quality is excellent, few if any grammar issues.
Natural dialogue, characters that feel like they actually exist in novel.
Good story pacing,
Naruto characters, decent inserts that match with the world.
Naruto world with some worldbuilding from mc’s perspective.
I don't understand why he told naruto about scroll of seal at all. That's illogical and unwarranted.
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Writing quality is excellent, few if any grammar issues. Natural dialogue, characters that feel like they actually exist in novel. Good story pacing, Naruto characters, decent inserts that match with the world. Naruto world with some worldbuilding from mc’s perspective.