Writing quality is excellent, few if any grammar issues.
Natural dialogue, characters that feel like they actually exist in novel.
Good story pacing,
Naruto characters, decent inserts that match with the world.
Naruto world with some worldbuilding from mc’s perspective.
3 months ago
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Incognito_3200
Very Good one but it's a chines fan fic if i remamber correctly mizuki gonna learn sage mode and gonna teach sasuke insted of orochimaru [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
19 hours ago
0
Braylon_Minor
Can’t wait for the mc to get more powerful loving the story so far
17 days ago
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Braylon_Minor
Can’t wait for the story to go in the later arcs of Naruto
a month ago
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Braylon_Minor
Great story can’t wait to see more chapters in the future!
a month ago
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La_rata
Me encanta esta historia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
2 months ago
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PDanac
I don't understand why he told naruto about scroll of seal at all. That's illogical and unwarranted.
Writing quality is excellent, few if any grammar issues. Natural dialogue, characters that feel like they actually exist in novel. Good story pacing, Naruto characters, decent inserts that match with the world. Naruto world with some worldbuilding from mc’s perspective.
Very Good one but it's a chines fan fic if i remamber correctly mizuki gonna learn sage mode and gonna teach sasuke insted of orochimaru [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Can’t wait for the mc to get more powerful loving the story so far
Can’t wait for the story to go in the later arcs of Naruto
Great story can’t wait to see more chapters in the future!
Me encanta esta historia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't understand why he told naruto about scroll of seal at all. That's illogical and unwarranted.
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