started good but became classic Chinese names like moon lit, root tree became unbearable and there is old fashioned Chinese style harem a major drawback
a month ago
13
FluxleX
story premise was good, like grandson of second hokage with Naruto knowledge but the author just had to shove it in the system and moreover no. it isn't even simple system but power system from the bleach like someone man with Ulquiorra Cifer power he can just streamroll early or mid or even maybe to some extent final of Naruto. like come-on you had the right foundation, tobirama genes, senju genes, even if I only read 2 4 chapter, it seemed he was planning to take kurama for himself, why did the author have to bring bleach power system here.
a month ago
13
daoist_cat
the first 40 chapters were good the premise was interesting and seemed to be developing good the system was meh but slowly getting ulqioras powers was also interesting but after chapter 40 the quality takes a serious dive names become garbage like nawaki becoming sheshu and then even worse becoming rope tree like what? why? how? and then it feels like entire chapters are missing because suddenly there are random developments being talked about like they happened over a few chapters but were never actually mentioned until that moment with people having sudden personality changes for no reason all in all it's horrible because it gives you hope for a good read and right when you get into it, it suddenly becomes unreadable garbage
23 days ago
5
DetectiveJones
Story was decent starting out with a pretty average translation. Not amazing but readable, but then it went downhill hard like the translator gave up. Perhaps because the story itself become your average Chinese slop. Hell the latest chapters read more like a Wuxia novel what with Ancient Kingdoms and shit. Not worth the time
22 days ago
4
bmon
Past chapter 50 just turns into slop. The translator just stopped putting in effort.
22 days ago
4
Dorian_1192
Giving a 1 star review because half the 5 stars are one guy using bots to spam 5 star reviews, not planning on reading
13 days ago
2
DFAR
hasta el capitulo 100 o 120 esta bien , después de eso tiene una caída de calidad inmensa , los nombres chinos aparecen en todo lado , se vuelve una troleada completa , la premisa es buena , el extra de la plantilla de ulquiora no molesta realmente , pero luego del capitulo 100 un desastre que da risa, pero no dan ganas de leer mas
23 days ago
2
behind_your_sister
MTL name Bro.....................................................................................................................
a month ago
2
Patrick_Hardy
I love this story i hope you continue it
21 days ago
0
Garcon_Garvens
It's a shame there's more romance that doesn't have any feelings.
started good but became classic Chinese names like moon lit, root tree became unbearable and there is old fashioned Chinese style harem a major drawback
story premise was good, like grandson of second hokage with Naruto knowledge but the author just had to shove it in the system and moreover no. it isn't even simple system but power system from the bleach like someone man with Ulquiorra Cifer power he can just streamroll early or mid or even maybe to some extent final of Naruto. like come-on you had the right foundation, tobirama genes, senju genes, even if I only read 2 4 chapter, it seemed he was planning to take kurama for himself, why did the author have to bring bleach power system here.
the first 40 chapters were good the premise was interesting and seemed to be developing good the system was meh but slowly getting ulqioras powers was also interesting but after chapter 40 the quality takes a serious dive names become garbage like nawaki becoming sheshu and then even worse becoming rope tree like what? why? how? and then it feels like entire chapters are missing because suddenly there are random developments being talked about like they happened over a few chapters but were never actually mentioned until that moment with people having sudden personality changes for no reason all in all it's horrible because it gives you hope for a good read and right when you get into it, it suddenly becomes unreadable garbage
Story was decent starting out with a pretty average translation. Not amazing but readable, but then it went downhill hard like the translator gave up. Perhaps because the story itself become your average Chinese slop. Hell the latest chapters read more like a Wuxia novel what with Ancient Kingdoms and shit. Not worth the time
Past chapter 50 just turns into slop. The translator just stopped putting in effort.
Giving a 1 star review because half the 5 stars are one guy using bots to spam 5 star reviews, not planning on reading
hasta el capitulo 100 o 120 esta bien , después de eso tiene una caída de calidad inmensa , los nombres chinos aparecen en todo lado , se vuelve una troleada completa , la premisa es buena , el extra de la plantilla de ulquiora no molesta realmente , pero luego del capitulo 100 un desastre que da risa, pero no dan ganas de leer mas
MTL name Bro.....................................................................................................................
I love this story i hope you continue it
It's a shame there's more romance that doesn't have any feelings.
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How many chapters does the original have
how many chapters does the original have?
Story was going good, but Mc became strong way too fast. in order to pay word count Mc went to One piece and that's when I stopped reading.
love this and I hope you do more of it!!