Nirvana
In the distant future, on a vastly different earth from ours, lived a young man named Emile Reeder who's driven by his pure love for Martial Arts.
Emile's father, his only remaining family member, trained him from a young age in hopes of reviving their family. As his training grew nearer to completion, he sent Emile into the latest Virtual Reality Game, Nirvana, with the premise of challenging stronger opponents.
Little did Emile know, a deep secret hid within the game capable of changing the world. A secret connected with his deceased family.
Follow Emile's journey as he travels through Nirvana meeting new friends and rivals, challenging powerful adversaries, all in an attempt to grow stronger not just in the game, but also in the real world.
P.S. Shoutouts to Kiroji, Attiq, Akera, and LiroyJeckins for their help on the synopsis.
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Here are some warnings and information.
English is my third language so bear with some of my mistakes. Spanish and Bengali being my first two languages.
7 chapters per week. There may be more depending on certain events.
Best book I have ever read. This gives me hope for the future. The author is the coolest person ever. I wish that the author wrote more chapters. 2 chapters day isn't good enough for me. I want more.
Writing Quality- Really good. I can read a lot of things fluidly. I never see any mistakes. That might be just some of my experience. I'm not a writer or editor so I'm giving 5 stars for writing quality. Stability of Updates- The author has always fulfilled his promise of chapters. And he does at least 12 chapters a week with some bonus. So far every week has a bonus. He gives bonuses based on goals or achievements that the book meets. 5 stars. Story Development- I have a general clue on to which direction the story is going. In the beginning, it might seem like a normal VRMMO but more things about the world are revealed. And we have some bit of foreshadowing. It's either going for a revenge plot or world domination. I don't know. 5 stars. Character Design- There is a cast of 5 people. MC, future love, 3 friends. We know a lot about MC and future love. There not dating yet. There are a lot of interactions between them though. It seems realistic for them to fall in love at some point. His friends each have their own personality. (I'm using their in-game names) Mystical Flame: MC. He's a martial artist. He seems to be a genius but no one has admitted to this yet. Or author hasn't admitted yet. He has many personalities. He enjoys helping people out. He's not shameless. He does get embarrassed sometimes. I forgot what he looked like. It's somewhere in the beginning chapters. Flower Queen: Future Love. A gaming expert. (Kinda surprising). Has special... things. I can't mention it since it is a spoiler. She's cool. Black hair. Brown eyes. MC relies on her a lot. Her background is a spoiler as well. She has a lot of spoiler features. Flowing Dream: The Quiet guy. He rarely ever interacts with others. The only time he does is when he accomplished something or when asked a question. Not many interactions with him. Time Walker: We don't know much about him. He's from a wealthy background. That's all I know. He likes to talk with others and isn't very quiet like Flowing Dream. Handsomest Crab: Attempts to be a comedian. cool character. there's nothing else about him. There might be more but I don't know. Has dumb ideas sometimes. He once picked up Time Walker on his shoulders to look for Emile in the crowd. There are probably much more efficient ways to accomplish the same thing. And his father also makes a few cameos. Has gray beard I think. Taught Emile the Martial way and introduced him into the *spoiler* world. The spoiler is a term revealed and explained in chapter 13 to like 15. So read up to there if you want to understand what world he's being introduced to. Gonna give 4 stars for this. I can understand their personalities but some characters need better explanations. Good job. World Background- Future world. The year 2155. Has teleporters. Food gets auto-delivered to his home in a few moments. I want this to happen to me when I order pizza. I hate waiting for like 30 minutes. T_T He gives other examples of future technologies. Like solar power cars and public transportation. Teleportation is the fastest way to travel but only the rich are allowed to do this. *Note* Some might question this. Why does Martial Arts exist if the world is so far in the future? Is this plot hole? The answer to those questions is that Martial Arts existing is explained in chapters 13-15. No, It is not a plot hole. There are special things about martial arts which allowed it to continue existing. The game world is something we don't know much about. The name of the world was mentioned somewhere in the beginning but I don't remember. He entered the third world at some point. A world of cultivation. He had a mission in there. This world was described partially. We know the different states of cultivation and how to differentiate between them. I'm going the world background as 4 stars. Overall- A good novel with a good story. I want to know more about the characters and the worlds. So KEEP GOING. I really like this novel and hope you don't drop it. This is my review and feedback. Overall, it is 4.6 stars.
Idk why I am Doing this... but this is to encourage you to hopefully upload 4 chapters or more per day. Personally I think you should at least upload 10 chapters per day, but il be lenient with you. 4 chapters a day or stop writing this book. Your only wasting our time.
Yes plz fo not drop this novel but then again I might need more I might be hook tho ok author so I going to read ch 1+ after this so I have to have 140 word
Just starting reading and am really liking this I don't know when this was released so that is why the stability of Updates is lower but overall a good story and progression is not boring like some others that I have read before. The background is the general with a few extras but the history of the character's family I hope will be slowly be released for martial arts would nearly be useless as generations go on. This is only my thoughts and even if It isn't writen the story is fantastic
İt's book Really good I recommend you to read ndnnxnnzmzmsmsbdnejdjxnxmmsnsmama sjsnbsban xnsjsjlaknxnsjwkznakalcbskskxjsmaksbbznakamxnakwk
Definitely worth the read . give it a try seems promising to me . Plus point its just beginning so have alot room for improvememts . Rank 48? for me its in top 5 novels .So keep it up and good luck imma give all my stones to u ☺☺
Guys give this novel some power stones. Great story, interesting and fun at the same time. This story ... just give it a try and u will know it yourself. Dont forget to give it power stones though😀
Just starting reading and am really liking this I don't know when this was released so that is why the stability of Updates is lower but overall a good story and progression is not boring like some others that I have read before
Didn't start reading yet but can anyone give me a spoiler as to what's going on, since I have a lot of novels I want to read and just no time to try them 1 by 1, so small spoilers really help into choosing which to start with. Thx!
A good book with a very good start. Continue the good work.. 140 characters. 140 characters. 140 characters. 140 characters. 140 characters.
God i love this band, can’t believe someone wrote a novel about it. Really love the guitar solo part where Kurt Cobain loses his ****. I recommend this to all music and martial arts lovers. It’s the perfect fusion of music and wuxia.
Great story, entertaining and fun . I request author to not make it like rssg where practically 80% of the chapters are wasted explaining how op is mc and his equipment blah blah . Atm i see nothing like that and hope the author continue this way. And man u can slow down the story pace . Thx for the novel and good luck 😊
This novel is pretty good, thx for introducing this novel to us . Guys read read it and you will not regret it . this novel should be in top 10 of originals easily .
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