DxD New Dragon!

The story started fairly good if you look past the bad grammar, but it started going downhill when Author decided to force a "tragedy" on the MC... I’m gonna spare you the details and just say that it turned out to be a complete waste of time, power levels are all over the place (Ophis is a weakling compared to MC, but he gets his as.a handed to him in his first main battle), and characters act completely out of character. So yeah enough said, don’t waste your time!

All i can say is sh!t im out of this stup!d novel no power rankings what so ever just say mc is as strong as ophis then out of nowhere bham damn author just make mc like an ant easily squish even early chapters the story is so f*cking emo low update speed and story is just like the fall of grim fanfic put OP MC in other perspective yet weak as ant compare to antagonist. Story keep jumping from place to place azazel was fighting michael and sirz ech then escape nxt instant leave trouble to mc next leave from who knows where planet the damn crow hide then switch again to another place the damn trio looks like best friends that will even share their own woman to each other. DONT BOTHER READING THE FANFIC U WILL ONLY GET CANCER READING!!!!!

No logic in power levels and absolutly hateful, unreasonable tragedy stuff....not to mention mc is a pussy...................................................

Here your first review. I wish you good luck and try to take contructive critcism and ignore haters and always remember the famous quote of Stan Lee:"If you have an idea that you genuinely think is good, don't let some idiots talk out of it".

Well the progress is but the well not detailed one......,........................................................but it's satisfy ng enough well it get better in future anaway..........✋✋✋✋✋✋😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Dropped like the sack of **** it turned into, way to nerf our already ****ty mc you retarted **** have a horrible time writing this ****ty story I won't be here to see it I know that much.

It was decent at best then he had somebody ophis and big red level get destroyed by somebody who would have a reason to kill the other two yet they won't. Not only that but the mc the guy at ophis and big reds level has been training his fucking hardest his entire life then somebody with a dragon on the same level and younger who trained yes all her life too but she would have maybe the same constitution as mc at best but could still train harder than him TF? Like then you said Tiamat trained her harder. I'm fucking sorry but why the **** wouldn't bahamut if he knew this might happen?!?!

DONT READ THIS NOVEL IS A REALY REALY BADY SERIO NAO LEIA ESTA HISTORIA NAO VALE A PENA TRAGEDIA NO COMEÇO QUE DEPOIS DESCOBRE QUE NAO ERA TRAGEDIA PORRA NENHUMA O PODER DO MC VARIA MAIS DO QUE ENERGIA NO INTERIOR DE MATO GROSSO

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Typical dxd sh!tfic kills off MC parents while he gets strong powerup Typical dxd sh!tfic kills off MC parents while he gets strong powerup Typical dxd sh!tfic kills off MC parents while he gets strong powerup

The story so far is quite interesting but you havnt gone into any detail about the dragon in the mc and the bit where mc saw the damage that happened where he fought issei there was no description on what damage and where thay fought exactly.

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overall horrible grammar even if it started out fairly decent in the beginning it just turned out our ones start going downhill look at the comments it's a horrible fanfic