Wild Woman • Emperor Of Longxian Empire : Beast Buddies
Fall in a river, get a pet, get a husband, happily ever after.
But it’s not that easy as you think,
A girl named Lin Kexin, her younger sister Lin Xinbai, pushing her into the river and saying that she died ‘tripping’ on a stone and falling into the river,
She then wakes up when river ride has ended and noticed she has become a different person all of a sudden! Their souls were swapped!
Seeing an injured animal, as a former veterinarian, she uses her skills to heal the poor creature and make it even stronger but oh boy this wasn’t just A creature..
It was the beast king, she didn’t know HOW a such a furry and cute creature should have been the beast king, and so then she decided that she would nurture him until he grew up
The only flaw was that she didn’t know how much her life had changed after deciding to keep the poor kitsune, by her decision she changed the future and made the world a better place.
The thoughts are all jumbled. There are no lines I can follow which might connect me to any of the characters. Over-all confusing. It's like a mix of this and that doesn't brings out any anticipation for what will happen next.
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The story line is looking very promising. I am looking forward to seeing your good work. Thanks for the enjoyable story. Keep up the good work.
Overall: confusing When I first read the summary I was looking forward to the story, but the very beginning of the first chapter felt like it was the middle of a book after skipping the first two books. Its confusing. I want to like this story but the way things are lined up leave no coherent story to follow. Please please please do some heavy editing cause the main idea for this story sounds cute and loveable.
The story was very choppy. The transition wasn't very good and the story didn't set up a good background setting. Character development was okay but it needed some work.
Please review if u want to dont be a turtle and stick ur head into ur shell, maybe ur shell is ur stomach OOOOO OHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Lol sorry.