SPORTS STAR SYSTEM
Author: ValQqlChose
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Yin Ling atfer 18 years of obeseness discovered his passion for sport, and enjoyed it for two years but quickly encountered financial and health problem which lead him to become a coach. Despite everything he never forgot his impossible dream about becoming a professional.
After his early death, he will come back to when he was 12 years old with the fame system, and finally realize his dream
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Hi I have read the first 7 chapter at this moment, The story telling is quite good in my opinion, the grammar and vocabulary are far from perfect but still acceptable, some word repeated like « thus » can be annoying but it doesn’t matter for me. The story development is quite good, there is finally a system novel who explain where the system come from ; there is still the cliché with the system being a girl but before critiquing I will see how it goes. At first the chapter length was very annoying but now I think it’s good, the last chapter length should be around 1,5k words (didn’t count so don’t blame me if it’s false) but the author said that the chapter should be at least 1,2k words so it’s fine for me.... Way better than at the beginning anyway, I nearly dropped the novel because of this at first I think it’s a good start, but it’s just the beginning, I simply hope that the novel won’t be dropped that he will keep up with his once chapter per day with at least 1,2k words promises, and that of course the story will still be interesting.