MHA: Sandman

When i saw the story was no harem I had to read it. I like how the author developed the mc's personality so far. I like that he is handsome. I hope to read more, this story is greate~☆

This is really good. I like how the mc is flawed but in a good way. He seems like an unstable sociopath trying to fit in. Aside from it being slightly edgy at times I have no problem with this. The story flows smoothly and the other characters are represented accurately. I also love the no harem part which is like cherry on top. I am really waiting to see how the reactions will be when he meets toga. Overall a good story with good grammar which shows rather then tell and an unique mc with a strong quirk but not op, different from fix it gary stus with op quirk. I really hope you don't drop it. Keep up the good work.

I like this but why did the MC tell most of his power in chp...pls dont make him a idiot that explains what he does.......keep him smart and OP..dont make him a perverted pansy ]....also the water weakness...maybe allow him the power to absorb moisture and make anything he touches into sand...ie: like crocodile but OP....add some romance and fluff BUT pls build it........if harem keep it small..................anyway GL............

holy **** this is sooooooooo fucking amazing, Hitomi san you need to finish this story pleaseeee!!!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💚💚💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡💜💜💜🖤🖤🖤

Amazing novel with good psychological build of characters and development though a bit quick, I like to think it's so for a reason, the change of pov is well written, maybe a bit abrupt and not so clear but the way of thinking of the different characters is unique for now so it's good, the world building for me is an automatic 4 as it's a fanfic, overall it's very good and interesting for an ******* (let's hope it remain like this and that the trash of webnovel doesn't get to him lambasting him only out of jealousy or silly willy-nilly reasons such as personal fantasies)

First of all only docking a hefty amount for lack of updates and stockpiled chapters. The Mc himself is a solid and fleshed out character. And his abilities are clearly set-up and described, allowing immense enjoyment on my end. The multiple povs throughout the chapters are pretty amazing and can be a large engaging part of the story most times. No spelling or grammatical errors spotted in recent memory by me for this thing, Baby's solid 4.2/5 Would recommend.

I AM HERE! Like a normal person. Grammar is good. Urm, what else? This story won't be easily dropped, as it'll probably be my only novel for a while. As for everything else, do read it. If you don't like it, I'll pay you all the money I've received to write this, you know?! (P.s: It's none)

this novel could have so much potential, I was loving it and really wish you would keep writing. it's really good so far. .

Good mc, good background for mc, good wish system, good grammar, good something something and more something I'm lazy to write more dbjwosbrlsofnrksitneoofkbkdujid

Reveal Spoiler

Will he ever in the future be like sandman from guardians ? (the jack frost, santa, tooth fairy, easter bunny thing) ........ ....................

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I really like this book, a friend recommended it and I was like “WOW IT’S AMAZING WHY DIDN’T I SAW IT EARLIER”. Amazing work author-sama keep with the good work, it’s a really amazing fanfic.

The story looks really good so far. For all those who are turned off by the MC's personality: read until the first intermission. He undergoes some development before that and I think you'll only have a good idea, what he is really about after that chapter.