DC: A New Kryptonian, A New Superman
A specially bred Kryptonian soldier was deployed for the first time since he was born. After all the lessons, all the teaching and sparring, the soldier couldn't wait to help police and protect Krypton and all it's people, to help keep the world he loved, safe.
But...life has a way of going against what you want.
Krypton exploded, ripping open a tear in the fabric of space. Said tear swallowed up the soldier and by a chance of fate, he wasn't ripped apart like all the others who were sucked in. Instead, he was transported through space and time to Earth.
How will a soldier who was bred to protect a planet decide to live his life when the planet he was made to protect is gone? Will he wallow in pain and self-pity? Will he pick himself back up knowing that he isn't the only one of his race left? Or will the pain corrupt him and turn him against the new planet he is on?
(A/N - Just a straight heads-up, if you want some perfect MC who doesn't have emotions or doubts, just leave. Don't read this and if you do decide to read, don't complain. It'll only fall on deaf ears.
If you also looking for an MC who will kill villains and whatnot, then also leave. I assure you that the MC won't be lenient with villains but he won't kill them. Not with the Justice League breathing down his neck and stopping him.)
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Yo this is soo good for only two chapters so far author keep up the amazing work How tall is Kars if you don’t my mind me asking and will he get a last name soon?
Love the story and the direction that the author is taking the story too since not many can bring out the comic book character's specialized personality, and view point as in how they'd act. I personally haven't read any sort of Dc comic books but from watching the cartoons and listening to the YouTuber "Comicstorian" narrate the storyline of the comics really makes me feel like I'm actually getting a sense of the characters. Keep it up author this story shows alot of potential for growth.
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This story is well written and has introduced itself in a great manner. The MC is developed in a way that draws you in and makes you develop a attachment to him. I hope I see more of the story and will be waiting.
Cool story, too bad it got dropped :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
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So far it's good. I like how you've portray the mc, he's a little broken as far as his emotions which is understandable. He hasn't lost his **** and turn into a whiny b**ch nor is he oblivious of the girls feelings.