My Empire of Dreams

Shameless five star review from author. Hope you would enjoy the novel.

The story is awesome and I want to read more of it. Author please release fast. world building is awesome and I am a big fan of world building novels.

It's written very well and the plot is a way to different. Reading this novel will surely be one hell of a journey. I am craving for more chapters. Though it's only eight chpts, I am hooked.

Really great job!! The author created a really good system story and characters, a big world where we learn about the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid heavy cliché in an already overcrowded genre without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.

I've only read one chapter so far, but damn I am impressed this feels like the system novel I've always wanted!!! The writing quality is top notch and the story is very good!! Keep up the good work author, you've made me a fan!!!

The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.

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I first read the synopsis and I was suddenly hooked! I read it and oh my I was even more amazed! You have done a good job author! Keep it up!

The plot is fast. The pace is fast. There is little in the way of originality to background characters or world building. It’s another system novel that flies way to fast. The background characters opinions of the MC change with the flip of a switch. They go from years of knowing about him and his ways to adoring him over night. The troupes are pretty standard and overall it lacks when it has potential. If the novel would slow it down and it might find that it has more to offer than quick blurbs.

So cool, keep writing!! I love kingdom building and your writing is very good and readable so keep on thanks. Keep up ~~ Keep up ~~ Keep up ~~

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It definitely has a hooking title page and synopsis. The plot line is unique and well-written while the character design is interesting. Building this fascinating world really makes use of a good descriptive, and though there are rooms for improvement, I say that the overall idea and concept of this story is its strongest charm.