Return of the Otsutsuki (ATG)
Author: StraightMale
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The Otsutsuki Queen is chased down by an unknown force, her son, the Otsutsuki Prince, is raised in the Primal Chaos in order for him to grow up safely. However, fate has different things planned for him.
(THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I'VE WRITTEN A NOVEL SO CORRECT ME IF I'M RUSHING THE STORY. ALSO THIS IS JUST A LIGHT STORY, THERE MAY BE SOME PLOT HOLES SO DON'T EXPECT TOO MUCH)
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Too forcefull Too much bullsh't Bad reviews are deleted
Great ATG fanfic with no bullsh*t, I rate it 5 star, hope author will not drop it...........................................................
This is a good story. I hope that author will continue this story to the end and not drop it half a way. Character developments are good and world setting is good. I hope Ken's mother will be back to see him.
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Thank you for you're time and efforts..
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It's a good fanfiction, i like how MC isn't a beta good for nothing and doesn't have problem with manipulating people(even as basic as it was with the mother and daughter dou) and that he thinks and not just brute force everything, though in a cultivation world it's a necessity for brute forcing once in a while the only problem is I WANT MORE CHAPTER, *Cough* ahem, that's all. Thanks for your hard work.
Writing a full review review would just be a waste of time, just know that this fanfic is **** and if every chapter doesn't make you cringe then you should check your taste in novels
I'll evaluate it with one word.. "A waste" Well.. that was two words actually but who cares? Review: - that was kinda a good idea but the story development......agh Am not blaming the author or something I know that everybody has deferent thoughts But in my opinion this book is not worth reading why? There is a lot of plot holes Romance or idk what started waaayyy to early(hell the mc is still a kid??)and that ruined the plot(at least for me) ⚠️:I didn't read all the novel but that was what I understood from the chapters I read.... Final evaluation:2.0
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meh
The story is rushed. It's not well-thought out. Women fall in love with MC way too fast and he's what? 4-7 years old? It's not worth your time.
my only problem is update rate, but everything else is AWESOME
thanks for BAB ......................................................................................................................................................................................
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