#Alpha King#

It started with war, pleaded with tears and ends with blood

A title that holds tremendous power, three chosen. A curse that caused disruption, a war that unveils secrets.


A race for who would become the Alpha king, will it be Melissa or Micage or Devaro. Each capable, each crafted with their own past.

Alpha King

ACTION

ROMANCE

REINCARNATION

Let's get started for reviewing...?

Writing Quality
Good, the grammar is OK for me. But please divide the actual conversation and text to avoid a confusion.

Stability of Updates:
I won't criticize this. But at lease please consider upload 1 chapter every day. How can you do that? Simply, write four pages in MS Word for 2k until 3k words for each of the chapter, keep writing until at least you can cover 1 month full of upload then upload it one by one everyday automatically by system.

Story Development
I think you are describing about past events? The story flow is really fast and some of the stories skipped. Honestly, I had a hard time understanding your story and its flow.

Character Design:
Good. I found no faults when you are describing a character. Except, I hardly understand about their life background.

World Background:
Since it's still in the beginning, I won't make a review about it. But I love how you describe every races and how they find a mate in details.

Sincerely
Dead/Lost Novel and Manga Writer.

What a great book like wow this book is great and just I mean I'm literally lost for fricking words right there the damn thing I need a goddamn ending right now!!

I really like this kind of books and it caught my attention. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. Author please update quickly!! The story was nice and the way she described every race and characters were also really nice. Hope you reach more! And check her story out. It's worth your time.