The Legend of the Sword Saint in Runeterra

I have a feeling that this story will be great honestly I hope for a day when there is a reinhard fanfiction so seeing this really give me hope to see full badass sword saint of re zero

First of all, this is an alternate universe and the author didn't said that anywhere. The writing is really awful and unpleasant to read, he is clearly using Google translator and has little to no knowledge of English. The main character and the other characters are weird and the flow of the conversations are a big oof, it feels awkward to read it. There is a lot of problems in terms of story telling that needs to be improved as well, and until that happens my review will remain the same. Writing quality: 2 Story development: 3 Character design: 3 Update stability: 5 World background: 3

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Hi. Writing Quality-2/5= The author speaks Spanish and by what I can see isn't used to English yet. The novel isn't anything unreadable like a machine translation but it has more than enough potential to make grammar nazis faint from rage. Oh yeah and he has a weird habit of referring to the MC as "our protagonist" every single time, no idea why, seriously just use his name. Story Development-3/5= Nothing exactly outstanding but not complete trash either, the plot is pretty cliche until now and while it may be cool for new readers/cliche xianxia novels fans/harem wish fulfillment fans, for everyone else it's a little boring. The MC gets power > show off power to world > gets pretty girl attention > show power off again > gets girl > repeat but increase enemy power levels. The author had also given the MC so much power right from the start that the only ones capable of actually threatening him are the top of the top, so no real suspense because there's like only 5 people or less in the whole world that can actually harm the MC, overpowered MCs are indeed cool when done right, but it's bad in this case. Character Design-3/5= Again, the characters are pretty damn boring including the MC.If you never played LoL, you will not even slightly care about them. Pretty females are there solely to be in MC's Harem/fall in love with his awesomeness. Male characters are there to be either crushed by the MC or to just have some dialogues and disappear afterwards. Although maybe I'm being too hasty since there's only 8 chapters done and male characters will probably appear later, but with 3 or four important female characters who already fell in love with the MC with only 8 chapters, I can already guess where this novel is going. World Background-3/5= Not much to say about this. It's a fanfic, and the author only made a slight change to the world background(He put back something that was not considered canon anymore in the lore.) and didn't change anything. He doesn't really flesh out the world background or even explain it at all, readers are expected to already know everything beforehand about LoL and Re:Zero. This makes it hard for anyone who doesn't play LoL to like this novel, and if they do, they will need to constantly search online about everything. In a nutshell:This a cliche, chick magnet OP MC harem fanfic where all the female characters fall in love at first sight or when the MC is even slightly kind to them. The MC is so overpowered that there is no real challenges and the characters are so 2D it hurts, with forced relationships with female characters left and right. The author also didn't bother explaining the world even the slightest bit so if you aren't a LoL player get ready to search on Google a lot. To the author: Sorry mate, I know you are just writing this for fun and you are still a newbie author, but I have to point out your mistakes, so you can eventually correct them and make your novels better. I'm sorry, you can talk trash about my fanfic too if you are pissed. Forgive me, will ya?

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Story is good, hope we can see progression. LoL fanfic is very rare.