One Everlasting Date

Well, I should've written a review before... Anyway, I'll try to express my thoughts about the story. Regarding world construction, I think that, even in the end, it still has more mysteries than explanations. But, in this case, I don't think that's a problem. In addition to not being the focus, it gives a "mystical" feeling to the situations, mainly to the fact that everyone's death is already predetermined, either by gods or by destiny. About the characters (in this case, Xuyun and Sui), I think they were developed according to the story's proposal. As it's (unfortunately) a short story and revolves around temporal questions, it wouldn't be plausible to develop each one deeply, because, for them to really know each other, it'd require A LOT of time together, which they only achieve at the end, when they finally overcome the obstacles. I had no problem with the writing quality. It allows a very fluid reading and, even if there is some grammatical error, I don't think it's so big as to prevent the understanding of the sentence or the chapter (and, after all, my own English is bad). In my opinion, despite being short, the story was very interesting, and presented a very unique theme among the BL genre. It's amazing to see how their love develops, how the author worked it out, and how they're willing to sacrifice everything for one more chance. I hope I didn't give out big spoilers, and for those who are willing, it's worth giving a chance.

why these chapters are like super short , it's killing me you know . This is just so interesting . ...................................................................................

this book is just beautifully painful or painfully beautiful ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................that's it so i am filling the rest of the review with dots..................................................................................................................................these are still not enough......................

an inter sting way to start a story. how have the repeated days gone by, would they uncover a way to avoiding the death? I really like the writing stile in the story, it makes it feel light and easy to follow.