Walking across the street 23 year old Bai An saw an injured kitten limping across the road as a huge vehicle sped towards it. Her animal lover instincts kicked in and she pushed the kitty away just in time it's body landing on an old torn up mattress. However Bai An herself was not as lucky with no one wanting to risk their lives to save hers she quickly fell victim to Truck Sama.
"At least I did a good deed" was her final thought before her mind gave into the darkness.
Waking up she sees her self floating in the air, everything around her is pitch black as her mind races wild with idiotic thougts.
"What the-..." all of a sudden a ball of light appears out of nowhere.
"WELCOME MY DEAR CHILD TO THE DIMENSION OF SPIRITS" A fat man bellowed his bald head shining brightly with vigor as if saying " look at me, look at me see how smooth I am I know u wanna touch it."
Bai An laughs at her ridiculous thoughts before bringing her attention back to the piece of blubber in front of her.
The fat man whose name she learned is Jun Qiang told her that he's from the committee of gods who decided that her death was too early so they decided that she would be Reincarnated into one of their worlds. Which one she doesn't know but she's a little excited because from the novels she's read before the protagonist always gets sent to a world that's a game they already played in their past life and they have a ton of cheats so she's hyped up.
Jun Qiang then wishes her good luck as she feels her spirit being sucked into a vortex.
"Awwwww YEAHHHHHH" she screams but it comes out as a baby's wail instead as her arms flail around her eyesight blurry.
GUYS!! I am the author of this Story but this is my reading account so it won’t tell you that..anyway yes my story has a lot of plotholes and yep it probably will seem rushed to a lot of you but this is my first time writting a story like this so if you could read with an open mind that would be appreciated. Also i am only 15 and started writting this at 13 so please don’t criticize me too hard😅 I am trying my best to write this that’s wIthin My capabilities😅. thank you for atleast trying to read it tho GUys!!! It may not be the best and probably has a lot of mistakes but i will try to fix thEm as much as i can!! Thank you fir taking your time to read this review!
hey no worries I am a new author too take your time trust me it will be better than trying to rush the story I still only got 10 chapters on my own novel but that is mainly due to school yahknow how that is but it also helps you look over the story with a more calmed mind set so yeh it be my best advice and it helps with a lot of the grammer issues that you don't notice at first that and it gives you the ability to not have to stress out about writing something noy liking it rewriting it just to realize it was better before so yeh but anywho I hope you develope a wonderful story. ✌😸
good it is a fun story that the mc actually has a an enjoying family life for god sake its not a reverse harem I haaaaaate those
At first I thought the novel was just like any novel when the FL reborn as the villaness and show the true face of the heroine but then I found out that I was wrong when the plot became unpredictable .....I began to love the story and can't wait for more. ...
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Chapter 2 was what got me liking tjis story. Restarting life inside womb, now that funny! A few punctuation errors here and there but that doesn’t affect the story at all. Ready to read more!
could not for the life of me get hooked.its too apparent that writer is still new. plot is quirky in a good way but character development just ddnt hold up
this is a good novel but there is just one thing that will maybe bother most of you... and it is the cringy shit that the author makes the characters say
I Love It. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ Next Year F*ck Yeah i'm Ugly Bastard
hmm the FL is funny even the mL they are cute together they are still a baby but they are already a genius haha it's kind of funny it's like they have a baby secret hihi
I love this story, it is intriguing and I couldn't put it down, a must read. great job! the characters are likeable and melia is so narcissistic 😂. it's very humorous.
Is this novel completely completed? I read the last ch 111 but it looks like there’s more story to go????????? Ch 111 ending is a bit disappointing if it read done😭 Author please give us more with happy ending.
To write this kind of novel in your 15.. well done!! That’s just what I can say✅ Your style of writing is not bad. Truely a gem. You have a big potential to go far in the future. Your writing got style too. Well done author!!!👍🏻✨💦
I LOVE IT! THE PLOT IS REFRESHING FOR ME.. Because she likes to be a villainess and so powerful.. ans I am glad that the story starts as she was born.. not in the middle of the story.. I can see the greatness that the MC portrays... SHE IS PRODIGY! I LOVE IT! AND THE MAGIC! SHE HAS MANY MANA AND CHEAT THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE SHE’S UNBEATABLE! I LOVE THE FAMILY! They are so sweet and good..and the fiancee I am looking forward to their romance. I can’t wait to see more of MC’s Queen like revenge! I RECOMMENDED IT! SO GOOD!
I love this book sooooooooooo much! I can’t wait for more! I love the fl! She’s the right combination of smart, confident, and vulnerable. I also love how it deals with some real problems and harsh realities.