The Loner is The Gamer

The concept of this book is amazing, the only reason I have rated it higher than I think it should be. There are many problems with this book in the way the mc acts. The first is the size problem, like we get it he is massively filled with muscles etc etc but you don't need to mention it every chapter and keep comparing him to the hulk. I didn't rly mind him being like this as it separates him from his previous life to go along with this new world. What you did at the end where he can change between suited this well and made sense of why it happened. Something I wished he did more of is build, take in his own planet more. Built cities around the world. Meld it with nature to make a paradise-like world etc, explore his own PLANET, make something of it. But no, all we saw was grind grind grind... this made it extremely dull in a sense and to me made it seem lacking in creativity. Like you said he did things because he was bored, but then why didn't he explore the world walking around, discovering, building things etc? Just lacking creativity rly. The main problem with this book, however, is the mc itself. We don't see any growth any change whatsoever from the mc. He is still the same as the first chapter... this frankly should be impossible and doesn't make sense. It stands out as a massive flaw of the novel. As he has gamers mind from stopping him from going crazy and has someone to talk to in sys. He should have a certain calmness, wisdom etc to him. You can make him eccentric by making him do random things on the fly as you want. But there should be CHANGE as he grows older. Personally, I don't think he should be too eccentric as he has someone to talk to and keep him grounded. If you get what I'm talking about? Another thing is his fixation on earth, still being a human, being a neet etc For lack of better word he should have outgrown this with time and not care... He has his own fcking world. He should have outgrown his fixation on that he MUST return to earth etc. You forget he only spent 18 years on earth and 10,000 years on his world... The fixations etc just don't make sense. I hope this makes sense? I think this again is connected to the fact that the character doesn't have any growth or change. Being the exact same character from the start. For me, this just too severely effects the book to carry on. There are some other minor things, however, these are the most important for me. Gl to the author

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