ash and dawn
Author: Jake_Zick
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This story has promise as for being a great tale... needs editing, as I struggled through the first chapter. Grammar needs fixing, when a character speaks, start a new paragraph and be sure to add "quotation marks". Some words needing spelled correctly.
Awesome bookk! Keep up the excellent work![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]