Gala

Shameless? Maybe, but Hey. I think it's pretty Good. If you read this story, I hope you enjoy. This story has a long way and this is only the beginning.

outstanding book . I love the story development and writing quality. Your cover is also very dhope and I can't wait to read more[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=update]

I always love when people use a script for dialogue, it intrigues me, this is definitely gonna end up in my library. Also the cover is amazing, if you want to change it go ahead, but it looks BOSS.

This is a wonderful story where the cast of characters seem to be able to charm the readers and keep their attention occupied. The chemistry between everyone is amazing and the novel itself is engaging. Looking forward to more chapters!

The story seems good and is written impeccably, both the descriptive part and the interaction between characters, but there was one point that I found a little strange. Why do you put the characters' names before their lines?

Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

Awesome work on this novel, it really captures my attention. Keep up the good work author! And be sure to continue to make an excellent novel, because I'll look for this in the future. Kudos to you!

Reading this took really reminded me of when I was at school looking up at the teacher across from my desk. It captures the essence of youth, a compelling read! Good luck on your writing!

Awesome. Work from Sci-fi genre always get my hopes high and after reading this work, I can say it has not disappointed me. The dialogs, the scenes and the settings are precisely written with a good cover page. And it is a good thing that author already told in synopsis what the readers are going to dive in. The only advise I'll like to give is to update it more frequently. Apart from that everything is well and good.

This is my most favorite genre combined with my most hated format of writing. People very very rarely get play style writing correct. However, author has managed to pull off this difficult job with panache. Well done. I am looking forward to more.

Third Review! Idk if I should do that but why not! This book kinda intrigues me as it is written like a movie script. Of course, that doesn't mean it is bad. In fact, the ideas are great. I could get the feeling of plot and there are times when the script-styled writing turns into more of a narrative-style writing. However, this may confuse some readers at first due to the sudden major change in style. To be honest, that's all the flaws. The rest is just great!

Second review! This story was like a screen play! Unique conversations of characters. The plot was moving and was not stopping either. Having 5 leads will make the story have depth and we will find the lore together with them. World background was nice and World building was also superb!