I read the first chapter thinking I wouldn't actually read any of this then I read the second chapter for the memes then the 3rd 4th and 5th and at this point I feel like Id be being dishonest if I said I disliked this in anyway shape or form its really good in my totally honest opinon
4 years ago
2
OakFlame
Pretty good so far. The characters are very interesting, and the worldbuilding is great.
A bit more spacing between sentences would be great, some of the larger blocks of text are a bit hard to read.
Good overall :)
4 years ago
2
RenPenRen
This story is Great! I really like the author's simple and freedom style of writing. It made me undersatnd the story so well. I'd definitely recommend this book for people to read👌
4 years ago
1
ZeroSerei
I believe that this book is pretty amazing. It deserves more reads than it has garnered and I am seriously excite to read more. looking forward to more chaps my dude
4 years ago
1
Nwodo_Tony
wow I like your book so very well, the creatures, the character being an orb, and the world he is in, and his reincarnation, jester and all other names he answered in his former world, but I wanna know where the story is heading,
I will keep reading
4 years ago
1
EdMakuKusune
FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!
4 years ago
1
SchizoReader
Jehidas, has atrithis. From pelvis from wearing levis. Read this story, or you regret it. Miss the chapters, you'll get aspergers.
This is a short poem, from a schizophrenic golem.
3 years ago
0
Notio
MUAHAHAHAH NOW THAT I'M HERE, I CAN NOW FULFILL MY PLANS... to chill here and read your work....... so... I don't actually know what to say for a good ending... but yeah... bread is good... and good is bread.
I read the first chapter thinking I wouldn't actually read any of this then I read the second chapter for the memes then the 3rd 4th and 5th and at this point I feel like Id be being dishonest if I said I disliked this in anyway shape or form its really good in my totally honest opinon
Pretty good so far. The characters are very interesting, and the worldbuilding is great. A bit more spacing between sentences would be great, some of the larger blocks of text are a bit hard to read. Good overall :)
This story is Great! I really like the author's simple and freedom style of writing. It made me undersatnd the story so well. I'd definitely recommend this book for people to read👌
I believe that this book is pretty amazing. It deserves more reads than it has garnered and I am seriously excite to read more. looking forward to more chaps my dude
wow I like your book so very well, the creatures, the character being an orb, and the world he is in, and his reincarnation, jester and all other names he answered in his former world, but I wanna know where the story is heading, I will keep reading
FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!
Jehidas, has atrithis. From pelvis from wearing levis. Read this story, or you regret it. Miss the chapters, you'll get aspergers. This is a short poem, from a schizophrenic golem.
MUAHAHAHAH NOW THAT I'M HERE, I CAN NOW FULFILL MY PLANS... to chill here and read your work....... so... I don't actually know what to say for a good ending... but yeah... bread is good... and good is bread.