10 trillion karma reincarnation: kengan system in the Baki world
Author: Rabidreader
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Khyle has been an avid fan of the kengan and Baki series when unexpectedly saving a young girl on a home robbery he died and as a reward for his actions he got a 10 trillion karma and a system and go to parallel world and apparently it's the Baki world
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I'm just new to writing so any suggestions to improve my work is appreciated just don't flame me too much alright thanks after this I guess I'll work on a LOL fanfic
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disclaimer I do not own the Baki series and the kengan series
I also do not own the picture used above I found it in Pinterest and the mangas
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Unfortunately I didn't like this at all . Reasons: *I do not like the MC thinks ( too childish ) . *Too many " Time skips " ... In many ocasions it's too forced . *System nor properly explained+ emojis which adds to the absurd try of the author to make this more " visual " . * I do not like when the " system " has a mind of it's own and has a humoristic side which is nonsense as it's only a TOOL. *Many lines repeat themselves making the reading very unconfortable. * Unnecesary text * This is the worst of all for me : I'm 99% sure author is using the chinese cultivation bullsht idea. For me cultivation is the worst cancerous ff that could ever be . At least add a specification that this is cultivation so I don't waste time. The author tried to do something good but adding so many small things made a huge mess that I unfortunately didn't enjoy and will stop on the 6 chapter-
Hello readers hope you have a nice day of course I gave myself a lot of five stars it maybe biased but it's myself hope you enjoy my story and thanks for providing a review
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Am a massive fan of bake and ashura,but this fanfiction is the worst ones I've read soo far. problems: 1- the mc is a shi# show,tge mentality and the way he is progressing is absurd 2- the side characters are drafted as kindergarten characters 3- the original mc "Baki" is made out to be a dumb,stupid brute that has no common sense( am a massive baki fan) it irked me to read this 4- the system is way to overpowered etc hes learned and mastered skills of multiple ashura characters and he's not even midway through his teens. 5- there way more I could add but can't be bothered to list
you should made Baki system in Kengan Ashura instead.. Baki.. that was stupid, there's no clear goal.. only to become strongest.. entire anime only beating someone..
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Amazing story! Wil you include the pickel ark? Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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hey author san! this is a great story soo far. but you should fix your grammar and writing quality a bit or hire a better writer to fix some error.
It has a rough start but it get better and better and you can see the writer is getting better. I think the best part of the story is the combat. The system kind of feel unnecessary at times.
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
this is really good man, i haven't seen any Kure clan FF out there and this is the best so far. grammar could use some work but it always happens with new stories so i dont really care, i hope you dont drop/lose motivation keep it up.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It was an interest story. The mc's relationships with the main characters were well established and developed, allowing for good future development. The plot followed accurately the canon, and the protagonist having a harem was well establised, and is a favor point in my point of view. However, the protagonist has little to non personal development, and anything he tries always seems absurdly easy for him. I recommend you to read it if you want an isekai anime story with an overpowered protagonist who travels through the canonical plot and enjoys life with a harem. I don't recommend it if you want a protagonist who develops throughout the story, with a cunning and intelligent personality (maybe even evil), and who has 1 to 0 love interests. Also, the author has abandoned the fanfic, so unless you don't mind seeing an unfinished story, don't read it.