A really well placed book with brilliantly sketched out characters that are a part of a fantasy world with level system and other magical elements. This novel will definitely reach a high stature, once you start updating more chapters that is. Everything else including the writing quality is really awesome, just a lil bit of typos but you can understand the story in a vivid way. Best of luck!
4 years ago
2
Dot_Ra_11
The story development and character/scene description is so on point. The way story is progressing and characters are building and growing is near perfect. There are some spelling mistakes though which I believe can be corrected while reviewing.
3 years ago
1
Heart59
5 stars for this book! Awesome job author! I really enjoy reading your book and would like some more! Keep up the excellent work! I’m rooting for you!
4 years ago
1
OEmilio
Let me just say i think this story is fabulous.
Everything from the description to the characters and their attitude. Its refreshIng and enjoyable. nothing is forced which is great because a lot of authors think they need to push all this info Into the readers face instead of letting the story develop naturally.
The author does a great job of setting the tone and pace beautifully.
This is staying in my collections, keep Up the amazing Writing 😁
4 years ago
1
Da_Witty
lovely plot! very descriptive n intriguing. I honestly love the author's use of words n I totally had fun reading❤️❤️very talented work by the author and I can't wait to read more! great work 😘😘😘
4 years ago
1
Uira
Overall the story is really good, a lifeless kid that down to adventure and challenge something that he would not challenge before. At some point, the relations between the character seems kinda off but it's still a good developement.
The background is promising with it's sci-fi things, it's a fantasy of monster, adventure, and sci-fi. A unique combination indeed.
Kudos for the writer to come up with this combination!
4 years ago
0
Claudia_Harlow
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A really well placed book with brilliantly sketched out characters that are a part of a fantasy world with level system and other magical elements. This novel will definitely reach a high stature, once you start updating more chapters that is. Everything else including the writing quality is really awesome, just a lil bit of typos but you can understand the story in a vivid way. Best of luck!
The story development and character/scene description is so on point. The way story is progressing and characters are building and growing is near perfect. There are some spelling mistakes though which I believe can be corrected while reviewing.
5 stars for this book! Awesome job author! I really enjoy reading your book and would like some more! Keep up the excellent work! I’m rooting for you!
Let me just say i think this story is fabulous. Everything from the description to the characters and their attitude. Its refreshIng and enjoyable. nothing is forced which is great because a lot of authors think they need to push all this info Into the readers face instead of letting the story develop naturally. The author does a great job of setting the tone and pace beautifully. This is staying in my collections, keep Up the amazing Writing 😁
lovely plot! very descriptive n intriguing. I honestly love the author's use of words n I totally had fun reading❤️❤️very talented work by the author and I can't wait to read more! great work 😘😘😘
Overall the story is really good, a lifeless kid that down to adventure and challenge something that he would not challenge before. At some point, the relations between the character seems kinda off but it's still a good developement. The background is promising with it's sci-fi things, it's a fantasy of monster, adventure, and sci-fi. A unique combination indeed. Kudos for the writer to come up with this combination!
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact: kerawood.review@gmail.com