Game of Royals : A Commoner’s Journey
Life takes a turn for Jack when, out of a good deed, he saves a girl from a group of bandits. It turns out that the Girl is the Princess of the Annville Empire! Impressed by Jack, the King appoints him as a soldier in the castle. Can Jack survive the castle politics while at the same time he unexpectedly falls in love with the Princess ?!
Jack starts experiencing the castle life, after he has joined the Annville Army as a soldier. Showing his skills and talents, he quickly becomes one of the nobles of the palace. Unexpectedly, he also falls in love with the Princess, Julie, who is the rightful heir of Annville Empire. However the other castle officials are not happy with the growing influence of Jack. Can Jack survive the tricks and traps of these evil castle nobles and marry the love of his life ?
A story filled with Action, Romance and suspense!
The writing is so good, that you want to continue reading more and more! I don’t really like fast pacing, but you did it quite enough, for me to forget about it. And the descriptions are so vivid and live, so that you can easily picture them in your head. Good work! Keep it up!
Loving the progression of this story. Starts right in the thick of the action as a princess sneaks out of her kingdom and is attacked by bandits only to be saved by the protagonist. From there the protagonist is brought into the royal court as guard and must navigate his way in this strange new world he finds himself in. The story is well-written and flows nicely. The characters are all unique and have distinct personalities and the chemistry is well-done between the protagonist and the princess. This is exactly what you want from a webnovel - a nice, light read with characters you care about and a clear and engaging plot to follow. Can't fault this one so far. I will definitely keep following it further.
Beautiful cover page! The synopsis is short but makes the reader curious about the content. The storyline is interesting and your characters expressive. You're doing great!
It's a interesting plot with a great world building. I love author's approach in monarchy era and I'm excited for Jack's journey as a new noble in the castle. Hopefully he got the princess lol. Now, the only issue is I guess the long dense paragraph. If you don't mind me suggesting, it'll be better to break down the paragraph to ease the reading. Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck! <3
There should be other words to describe a story like this!!!! AMAZING! INCREDIBLE! EPIC! BRILLIANT! MASTERPIECE! don't do any justice!!!! SUPERB I tell you 👏👏👏👏
Very well done with the scenarios. They are so life like making me not to lose focus for a second. The writing quality is smooth and this makes this book even more appealing. I am anticipating to see more from Jack!!!
I love this story it's so dope. I love the way the author creates suspense. It's story development and characterization is spectacular. Keep it up
Really descriptive with a lot of interesting dialogue. I like all the prologue chapters a lot, and the main story is great too! A unique plot as well. Overall, I would recommend it!
The beginning is really interesting and amazing. The fast pace is unlike so many other romance novels but is very interesting. There are a few grammatical errors, but otherwise, good work. Keep it up!
The story is very well writing, and has a very fast pace, the MC falls in love very fast too. I hope he doesn't get the princess that easy too lol, I know I know I'm a sucker for love dramas.
Ooh, a pet dragon? I like it. This Harry guys doesn't know what he is getting himself into. Can't wait to see how Jack develops as a character. Good story so far!
Very interesting story! Great pace and great character development. Plot is good, world background is excellent as well. Keep writing and posting! I am sure that this novel will do very very well indeed.
First, what I noticed is the powerful descriptive writing! It really features what is happening clear and well! Secondly I was amazing by the pace. I like how it goes straight to the point and gets into action! Love is also in the air💕💕 Keep up the good work author!!!
Hello, Author here. I would like to tell you that the novel is fast paced in the start. This is to quickly get to the main plot of the story. The story gets a lot interesting in the later chapters. Hope you guys will like the novel
For a beginning author, you did pretty well, mate! I really like how you wrote the entire chapter! *For starters, you should "Borrow" *cough* an image that perfectly fits your story in google. Yeah, i know, copyright, but, that is just for now. You could ask artist to commission a book cover so your novel would become a chef's kiss book~ *There are grammatical errors here and there but not enough to disrupt me from my reading. it was actually really good! Well, there are the use of adverbs, redudancy of "far away" you could use distant or miles away to make it sound more dramatic. At the end of the day, these are just my suggestions. You still have the last touch for editting your story. Kudos for the author, and good luck, mate!