If you don't like a boring Ff, then I think this will disappoint you, my Friend.

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Reincarnation: Death after Death

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Eh.... In general terms, the work is good (the second original selected world) . But the main character is some kind of gray, nondescript, uninteresting, there is no motivation, there are no goals, even life (simple). The disclosure of the worlds themselves takes place superficially, with minor characters, the situation is similar to that with measures, if they exist, and come on... In the second world, there are improvements in both cases, but very chuchut.  The clear sequence of what is happening in the story also suffers, there are places where it is not very clear what happened and was done and why. Well, something like that.

where shall i start? there's just so much things that are wrong with this fanfic etc the writing is confusing and sometimes you don't know what the author is trying to portray,the mc seems like a crackhead and the general direction of the novel. kudos to the author for attempting to write this

dont read this book, the author is even so lazy to not make a proper description on whats in the book so its best to just ignore it and look for a better one.

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