Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

The fact that the author has a better grasp of English than 99% of the people who post on this site is the only good thing I can say about this story. The MC is little more than a plot device, veering between competence and idiocy as needed to suit the plot. The fusion of the HP world and the MCU world is an interesting concept, but has been handled lazily and shows that not enough thought was put into worldbuilding. All this is symptomatic of the worst and fatal flaw of this story, that the author is unwilling or unable to deviate from the stations in canon. Starting the story in the 30s, well in advance of the main plotline of both franchises, should have given plenty of opportunities to cause meaningful changes. However, the author has gone out of his way to make his MC an over-confident and moronic imbecile whenever necessary, to make sure that all the major stations of canon will still happen. And what little original content there has been is so flat that it's not worth the constant Idiot Balls to make this story a glorified canon rehash. Basically, save yourselves the time. Just re-watch the HP movies, the MCU movies, and the X-Men movies and you'll get a more competently executed and enjoyable version of this story.

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Power, be it political, magical or social, is the ability to influence a situation in favour of one's desired outcome; so despite the MCs myriad abilities he is truly powerless. The author consistently kneecaps Mason any time he has the potential to exert power and by extension be relevant, leaving us with little more than a recap of canon from a different perspective. A well written world held back by an author to concerned with holding back.

Very mediocre and incredibly boring. It's like a take of HP fanfiction that's supposed to be 'realistic' but still 'op' and due to that it's not realistic at all. It comes out as a bit of a mess, really.

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i liked the previous one better. this has more details and all but in trying to make the mc not too op you made too weak even with all his powers. i mean he is a mutant, a sorcerror and a wizard who actually is physically strong but still got caught by someone and took so long to escape.

BACK!!!! Side note, not gonna start reading until this has atleast 15 chapters . .

the author likes to nerf the character to create new scenes, when the character is powerful enough the author makes him lose to a random mage who isn't even strong

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Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot. Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot.

The Fanfic has improved over time so I think readers that want to read this story needs to give it a chance first before bailing out. Don't expect a Gary Stu MC, the MC is overpowered but so is every villain he faces and this is not a wish-fulfillment story so don't expect an easy time for the MC. The author does a great job of making a realistic MC and great supporting characters and villains and is great at character development. The author also does a great job of immersing you in the world through great World Building, The only problem here for me is the stability of updates sometimes sucks.

Nice so far. Great long chapter. Hope the quality is maintained. Excited for more. Nice so far. Great long chapter. Hope the quality is maintained. Excited for more.

Boring that's all I wish to say. I have been using this story to help me with my sleep problems. I'm still figuring out how it has 4 stars.