One Piece - Supreme King

Good story !!, I can only ask the AUTHOR a small favor, if you have to choose a love interest for the MC (if he does not have one yet) choose between Charlotte linlin (let's not deny it, young and thin she is good), IM ( woman) or the one I would choose would be Tsuru (young) from the marines, you make her the age of the MC and fixed. Thus having a pirate-marine rivalry (incredible love-hate) !!

Recruit to the Crew: Shanks, Benn Beckman, Issho(Fujitora), Kuzan(Aokiji), Gild Tesoro, King, Patrick Redfield, Dracule Mihawk, Kozuki Oden, Catarina Devon, Laffitte, Van Augur, Trafalgar D. Water Law.......

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I read up to chapter 32 currently and gotta say it's a very good story. The author's other book is one of my favorites on this site. But that's enough about the author, let's talk about this story. The writing quality is pretty good as they are very few grammar mistakes, I noticed they are quickly fixed within a moment's notice. The author conveys what he trying to say quite easily. So you understand what he trying to do in each chapter. And the author has an editor who seems to be pretty good at his job as well. Now for the stability of updates, it's amazing. The author posts a chapter daily which is just amazing to me. For his other stories, the updates were so random. From what I could he had no schedule but for this story, it seems like he has one. So good on him for that. As for story development, to me it's perfect so far. The main character, Achilles is the son of a D and a former celestial dragon. But the main character isn't born just because of that. He doesn't have a special body like big mom but instead trains like a normal person. And so far the main character's level of strength makes sense within the world. As he isn't some sort of out-of-the-world character. He's still weak in the grand scheme of things. Also, the author flashes the characters and ideas in the story. He drops some hints and clues about certain things that will happen in the future which I appreciate. As the author isn't pulling stuff out of anywhere. As for the character design, not much to say about this part. They are good. I can't say much for the world background as it's One Piece. You can't mess it up unless you're trying to on purpose. But even then the author is adding his little twists which make sense within the world of One Piece. Which I really like as he isn't breaking the limits of the world. And that's my review which now reading it seems to be too long, lol.

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I will never understand how people can posts such clickbait and get away with it. When I first saw this I thought we were getting type moon character in one piece considering they have the same name and the author used the fate picture

Good story with a lot of promise I could see it continuing for a long while since there’s a lot of time and content to play with. MC background is dope and his cheat ain’t to op but is more practical making the story enjoyable. Grammar is solid and not much to say about world background since there’s plenty to work with in one piece with a decent amount being already fleshed out but with still enough unknowns that the author can take his own creative spin on it. Looking forward to future chapters and seeing what the MC will do and who he will recruit in the future.

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Honestly if you read skip the first 14 chapters. it is so boring and written horribly. The author made a lot of ominous hints for no reason the ruin the childhood arc. The parents are horrible characters too, I get this is a au but au are usually meant to be reasonable. both parents have all theee haki and are unreasonably strong and also posses stupid op devil fruits. lame. Then the mc a reincarnated person acts like a literal child not to not draw suspicion but because it’s his personality. I’ve only read to chapter 15 so it might get better but my god

This fan fiction is definitely a great one. After so many generic One Piece FFs, this feels like a breath of fresh air. Due to the pre-canon setting, there is a lot of room for creativity. So far the story is all-around good. There's adequate character growth and development. Build-ups to bigger events are mild but accurate and update schedule is uniform. Aside from that, overall, this FF is very good and I highly recommend it.

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Nice improvement in the quality of writing, not that the first iteration was bad or anything. Keep up the good work. ..............

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