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I like the way you wrote it, it's very clear and easy to understand. after all this novel is promising story. I love the characters and looking forward to them. keep it up!

Tho I see some space for improving, This story never fails to give you the feeling of comfort, and the bitter truth of life. Each chapter ends with a hope, and that makes it all more better.

This novel is just wonderful. Despite the need for improvement in the writing and its structure, the story is still enjoyable. The moment I started reading the first chapter, I instantly remembered novels about self-discovery, like “The Alchemist” for example, and truly this did not disappoint. It’s clear. It’s precise. It knows what it wants to tell you and does exactly that. Great work! 👏

The book is going great until now!! Evan though seems ambitious, he portrays a positive character. The descriptions are well written and i genuinelly wish that he gets to meet Iriene someday.. good luck to you author.. keep it up!![img=update]

The words and sentences are written are clear and understandable. The story itself carries out a well-developed plot that arouses the curiosity of the readers. It feels really good to read a story like this. and after a long while, I feel like I want a spoiler about what's going to happen next. I cant wait to see the next chapter. Author, you are so talented. please write more and more in the future.

The book is only just started and one can easy relate with it already. A beautiful plot all together that will get you interest and eager to read more. Great job Author!

I like how the author manage the flow of the chapters. Nicely work keep writing stories I'll root for youuuuu good luck love your story keep it up [img=recommend]

That was a simple, subtle but very interesting piece of work. looking forward to reading more. I loved the simple language use which still had the capacity to lure me in.

This is a really nice story. I liked the beginning and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! Author, please keep going and give us your best!

It really has a soulful approach that warms the readers' hearts. The thoughtfulness and awe in each line provides such impact. It is very nice to read as you realizes things along the way.