Time-Space Quirk in MHA

======== Well MC is Too OP for world background Pace is Too Fast for a reader too adapt. ( i mean i literally though what else will mc develop when he has such powers at age 13 on ch 6). No drama or flashback or background story its too straight story focused on mc power development. No foreshadowing and you wrote his whole stats many times..(it would be good if there was extra ch for mc stats or remind stats in about 20 chps it destroys readers flow.). No further potential in story development can be seen if you make mc too op ( 1 man army type ) he can literally get anything he wants with power and little bit manipulation and from then onwards story seems forced development. ==========

The plot is good, characterization of the main character and it's background A+ I love how it was written, it was easy to imagine scenarios. Loving the MC already 🥺🥺❣️❣️ Keep it up! Im rooting for yah!

Yep, the same ritual with the other authors, lemme give my fanfic this rating. And to all readers out there, thank you so much for your support. //Will be updating again this Sunday//

WQ - Grammar and Spellings are good but lessen the notes. They are disturbing. SD - It's good. No qualms about it. CD - This is good for those who prefer Cold MC. US - So far so good. WB - MHA; Who cares about canon??