Alfonse's Test
Author: KiriDuGema
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In a distant realm, meet Alfonse, a 19-year-old, His life is far from ordinary. Yearning for more, he breaks free from mediocrity!
With newfound determination, Alfonse quests to discover his true purpose. He embarks on a grand adventure to exotic worlds, befriending allies and battling an enigmatic force.
Witness Alfonse's awe-inspiring journey as he transforms into an unparalleled powerhouse. Experience his remarkable metamorphosis and the power within. Can he save the world?
Join Alfonse on an exhilarating ride through fantastical realms. Uncover mysteries and marvel at his transformation. Get ready for limitless adventure and the fate of humanity. The legend begins now!
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I'm excited to read further into the story! The story promises of an adventure and i can't wait to sink my teeth into it! The protagonist is relatable, and I love him so! good job author! I'm cheering you on! aja! ♥♥♥♥♥
This tale is well written, though a bit heavy on "Tell" vs show. still a good showing from this author, and I will be curious to see how this plot develops.
I really liked it there was just a few things that you could work on a bit more. I really focused on your first two chapters and helping you with those so you can see what mistakes and hopefully apply it to the future. But I loved it and you don't need to review mine but you can if you want!
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I'm really enjoying this story as I'm reading I have to say. You have action, fantasy and adventure. I'm loving the journey of the protagonist and I am strapped in for the ride.
Pretty solid story, the author brings you to an interesting plot from the start, however i do see some flaws, but looking at the newer chapters, it seems as the author overcoated most of them. Keep up the good work.
Great Story! It is so interesting and has a great potential. I like how this story is going so far. Hoping for more soon! Can't wait for more chapters!
Not gonna lie, love the synopsis. Always up for adventures. Haha. Fighting, author.........................................................................
Great story, Author. It's really very impressive. Keep on going Author. Fighting. .......................................................................
.................................................. The story has great potential . also kudos to you for making it interesting . but TBH there's more than meets the eye in this novel . so continue writing good luck.
The world is built expertly and you can tell that the idea is very good. The storyline is written at a great pace. The plot is engaging and I cant wait to see what happens next. More updates, please.
Only 10 chapters for now but all I got to say is that the story seems like it has a lot of potential to turn into something big. Keep up the good work.
I really like the MC's adventurous side. His personality is very relatable to many people like me 👀👀 I'm excited to read further developments in his adventures the people he will meet, the many different places he will visit. Looking forward to the writing !!