It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
I have a brother who's a bonafide Otaku. One time, he introduced me to this game called 'Spirit Infinite'. An Eroge bishoujo game is particularly popular among young lads. Its popularity stems from 15 beautiful heroines.
The game's story revolves around the protagonist named Shin Morino, an idealist of justice and peace. On top of that, a cheat protagonist whose main goal is to stop the world's destruction, but while at it, conquer girls along the way.
Then I, Fukushima Aki, a young adult who died at the age of 19 from a terminal illness. Living in the hospital, nearly my entire teenage life, shackled unto my bed, but that all changed when I died. I was granted a second chance to live a new life. However, that second chance was to live in the world of Spirit Infinite, the same game that my brother introduced to me.
What's more, I'm not even the protagonist but a nobody... With a handsome face? Who am I?
Nonetheless, with this second chance, I will live my life to the fullest!
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Notes: Not really modern, it's a mix of medieval and modern with some technology elements.
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Its 5 am.... i cûrsê author for keeping me reading all chapters in one go.... i demand very êrôtîc chapters with all details. It needs to be jûicy
Mc is underage and gets R@p3d basically everyday while he's sleeping. The author let's us know by making it obvious to us but the mc is confused "what's going on?" It's incredibly creepy and has completely ruined a character for me. Worst part is, you'll find out it's not just 1 person doing it to him. It's multiple. Do you have a R@p3 fetish author? there should be some sort of warning because it's pretty foul.
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Honestly, the mc is just a horn dog and only thinks with his lower mind thorough out more than half the chapter. And it is just all-around annoying to read about the mc when some of the important decisions he makes can be fatal to his strength. An example would be he would have picked the fox spirit cause it can transform into a girl like really dude... If he just lowered down his perverted mentality it would make this novel 3 times better maybe more.
I'm sorry but I can't with the academy arc I left out previous clichés because you handled them well but the cliché of being told no mana the director uses it starts in the lowest class is so overused it's tiring and so poorly implemented it's hard to read I try to keep going but I'm having a hard time so I'll leave it luck to others
The Writing quality is good, and the world-building is also good but the character design and story development need much work. The characters most of the time doubting their actions, then as soon as something happens they go in a self-blame mood and then to the I will sacrifice myself mode. From a rather interesting start, it slowly shifts towards the Japanese anime/manga style of characters (the indecisive, self-blaming, beta-ish kind). This not only ruins the characters that take turns to blame themselves for each part of the plot but also the story takes a great hit each time with their rather annoying self-talk. The story would be much better if about 50 percent of the MC's and other characters' self-talk is just removed, cuz now all you get is plot points immediately followed by the next character blames themself for this part of the story. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 2 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4 The total score - 3.2
The early chapters is good but it quickly deteriorate, it is simply the mc being played by other people, I hope he grows some balls or something.
I won't say anything about that thing that causes my thing to be deleted, C'mon it's an hrem novel with 3x pli cit content how are we supposed to say a thing if we can't even say that thing, dunno what are the tabo o words but I just want to leave a review to support the author. So pardon if it would be really useless hehe. Just check the novel on your own I guarantee that this story is meant for us (my fellow man of cultures xD) and write a review without saying those thing. lolol
even though it had a really good story the plot felt focred and annoying. ...............................................................
It has started good however it detoritied as it progressed sadly. As i read more and more i started to find the story stupid :/ Well this is to be expected as the story is about a eroge game however there are novels like Little Tyrant Doesnt Want to Meet with a Bad Ending which are doing a much better job even thought they are abput eroge games/ novels too.
The story is organic and the characters are original and not some run of the mill yandere cast. The main protagonist is somewhat shameless, and has a good sense of humor, and his power system is unique to him which is a major upside. Is he powerful? Yes. Is going to get more powerful? From what I am seeing ,yes. I am hooked on this story and can't to see where it goes.
Was kind of enjoying the story until one of the heroines raped the mc in his sleep at C112. She faces absolutely no repercussions and neither Claude nor any of the Heroines are upset over what she did to him and instead seem jealous and upset at Claude when he is literally the victim.
VERY VERY GOOD. Better than 99% of the other novels in this website. The story is interesting, the characters are great and i read everything in no time at all. Now im waiting for more chapters. Good job author!
Technically that is a fine webnovel. Author use English far better then me and yada-yada-yada. For the story... It's so cliche. Like wow. I was hoping that people whould at least be aware about isekai Troupes and funny anime clichés in 2021... You know, be a bit more self-conscious. - you ask too much. P. S. There is absolutely no difference between this mc and any others isekai mc. Like you can call him Sato, no one whould find it ironic.