Immortal Sin

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

Omg i am completely in love with this book, super interesting, super entertaining, my gosh, the writing style and plot is extremely wonderful, great job author! A must read and definitely recommend to everyone ❤️

Your creation is extraordinary Dear author. I got hooked on your story from the start. The background setting, the character development, thrill, English grammar everything is perfect. Noelle is a wonderful MC. The way you have pictured her character we are going to fall in love with her. The thrilling scenes you wrote gives us goosebumps. I am really amazed. This is the perfect book. I highly recommend it to be read by everyone. A must keep in the library.

The story is really captivating, only the prologue, I was already hooked up. Definitely adding this to my library. Good job author , I can't wait to dive in .

Okay, firstly, this story is so perfectly written. The author's writing style is top notch and the world building...gosh, it is just so good. I got hooked from just the prologue. I know that the updates might be slow, but you guys should definitely give this book a read. Trust me, it is worth it😊

I rarely give a book FULL five stars but here I am. this book is amazing, perfect in every aspect. when I was reading I felt so many emotions and I posted so many comments because I just love this too much. the characters feel real the story feels well rounded and real. the topics mentioned are so interesting and everything is for a reason. amazing, such work really makes me feel like I seriously want the physical copy of this book to be in my library

the atmosphere is amazing, and the details help me picture a lot. The character is relatable and likable. I like the whole premise of the story, it really makes you think.

Quite intrigued with the characters. Very dramatic, full of life and love how I could vividly picture college life. Pretty much in love with it or should I say Wyatt. He has a lot of things going on for him pretty there. Looking forward to more chapters and the adventures the author will be bringing in the book.

after reading some couple of chaps, I can say it's a 5 from me. the author have a vivid way of portraying scenes with words and a remarkable plot. please.. keep up the good work author!!!

At this point I would say the story is just awesome. The character development from the beginning is really nice and the story is progressing smoothly. Now I just want Noelle to do some face slapping. As for the writing quality it is very good with proper editing so that I don't have to spin my head. Great work author... keep them coming [img=update][img=update]

As my own work, I’m very proud of this story and how far it’s come along. Excited for the plans I have for it…and the new chapters upcoming. Get ready for some super seductive and heart throbbing chapters 😩💕