A Certain Heroic Academia

Everythings pretty good so fa…. but… Although rarely sometimes things feel under explained. Another thing is that the dialouge is really… not great. While its understandable and pretty clear its just… missing something? Also, when talking i feel that the characters say to much. The only other thing to note is that sometimes your word choice is rather awkward. Sometimes you use alternate words when something simpiler would’ve read better.

It's a good fanfic, but still a relatively amateur work. The writing isn't as engaging as some other works, so this can be a huge demerit for those discerning readers who expect quality fanfic from an original ranked novel. There's really not much to say, after all we're still in chapter 4, but I've been enjoying the fanfic, except for the part where misaka had to limit herself to using her power due to her time acting as a vigilante. If she had thought a little better she probably could have used the power as a vigilante only in melee or something like that, so she wouldn't get caught up in magnetism when in the AU. Another point to mention is that the author could spend some time focusing on refining the writing in order to bring more life and personality to the characters. They don't really seem to have much personality with the way things have been done. In conclusion, I recommend this fanfic as a good read for those who are used to it and who understand that we shouldn't expect professionals writing fanfics. Thanks for the good work autor-san, hope to see your progress over time.

Everythings pretty good so fa…. but… Although rarely sometimes things feel under explained. Another thing is that the dialouge is really… not great. While its understandable and pretty clear its just… missing something? Also, when talking i feel that the characters say to much. The only other thing to note is that sometimes your word choice is rather awkward. Sometimes you use alternate words when something simpiler would’ve read better.

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An amazing story can’t wait for more

I like it but when is she gonna reveal her electro powers? I Wanna see the railgun……….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..,…..,……….:……:.:……,……………………,,…………..,,;;/;,……….aaaann

My own review of my series. The dialogue is sometimes choppy, my ability to write scenes is subpar and most importantly, my upload schedule widely varies.