Dolled Up Wife: The Endless Torment Of Obsession

Hey everyone! Kwimili Aka Kiwi here, Just wanted to tell everyone who reads this story a gracious thank you and hearty welcome! If you have any criticisms and complains please feel free to comment or review on the novel. Thank You Again! (Ps. Yes I gave myself a 5 star review :3)

Soooooo , as this is the first review I don’t have a lot of material to talk about , however from this first chapters I can say I am very hopeful about this project , the writing quality is very good and the length of the chapters is just right , not being to short nor too long . While the plot seems cliché there is a reason why some plots become clichés , in the end it all comes down to how the story is written , and when it comes to that , I can say this story is looking pretty good😊😊😊

Gregory, do you see the small vent on the floor? Have you ever heard of Among Us, Gregory? You need to vent. I know it will be hard for you to be sus, but i know you can do it Gregory.

Only 5 chapters in and I'm already hooked it's that good . the story seems to be going at a good pace and the characters are written really well ^_^ I was skeptic about reading at first but I can tell u it's far from any "cliche" novel I've read so far. Yes the storyline is in a way cliche but, the characters, the writing style and overall the plot is original and written very well. descriptions and details are given when necessary .no detail is overly descriptive. the story did take up it's pace after chapter 02 but without being rushed. overall Im really enjoying how it's going so far and can't wait to see how our mcs turn out ^_^(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

A good story, a promising novel by a smart author! Come read this wonderful adventure with us! Expect great things from it in the future and give it a try!~

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The novel gets better and better , the writing style continues to improve and it feels more and more fluid , the fact that the author visibly gets better and better makes have very big hopes for this story😊😊😊❤️

10 chapters already and I'm super impressed with the novel , keep it upp ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Great start !!!! I’m really enjoying this novel , hopefully it’s a project that will continue .❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️since I had to fill the space😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

First book I read and I liked it! Make sure to post more because i want to read!!! Like the chapters very much yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!

Had to give a review because I remember your previous work too, Really glad to see your new novel and will contonue to read it, Really liked it, Thanks author

Seems like a really cool story actually, I expected a bit more cliche not going to lie but your style of writing her thoughts in detail is actually pretty sweet. Keep it up! Hope to get to see more chapters from you!

I can't even explain how amazing this book is turning out!! the detailed descriptions, the author's style and the characters everything is written so well 😃☺️ can't wait to read more about the characters 😁💕💕

Good novel with potential to become something big, Author is very kind on discord and a great person (Please help me they have me at gunpoint typing this)