From Darkness to Admiral

It’s little details that kill this fanfic, it starts small and then you start skipping fights cause each one is just pull guy to arm and stay still, then you start skipping arcs cause the mc will reflect after a fight, choose a course of action so something doesn’t happen again and then not do it, people in the comments are making jokes that the df is consuming his memories cause by chapter 15 he isn’t any more knowledgeable about the future than a normal person

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Hello everyone, author here letting you know that this is my first work and I am taking this step by step. This story will probably be on the longer side seeing as it takes a while to go from the bottom to the top in the world of one piece. Have fun with it. pieinskie

At first it was good, then he started posting nonsense bruh. Ruined it. Yvfrffffftghbbbbbhhhhhgfftttgggfttgftgffftfffttgfffgffgggfggggggggggg

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One star for thinking your reader are stupid. You are posting chapters from completely different unrelated novel randomly again and again, I think you wanted us to give you one start. So here I am fulfilling your wish.

u kill your own fanfic story bro. i dont know why u did it but immm sad to let it go now. gbye percy gdbye onepiece fanfiction arghhhhhhhhhhjj

aside from updating stability everything is bad, like the others say his an idiot even upto chapter 38. everytime he first fight he will become an idiot and be arrogant its like he didn't learned a thing from his past fight

Might change depending if the One Piece FF story actually continues and not some other story preview being posted making the whole readers hate it to the bone (author..you know that's the worse type of advertising your new work, by doing a preview of it on this Fanfic...they'll only hate it more, you can let them know about it but making a chapter not related to this FF story x3...that'll make them to not reader it anymore). Anyway will take it off my library and might not see it ever again by then, unless it pops up who knows, meh.

was really good until author decided to just abruptly use his current book to advertise his new one by putting 4 chapters of a new book with no context in the middle of this one adios.

Very good novel ... until chap 71 when he started posting something completely different! This is no longer the novel I liked and you destroyed the whole story AUTHOR!

A well-honed story that proves that you can find some good story on this site. The author did not make a system or harem so go for it guys, You won't regret it

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was really good until author decided to just abruptly use his current book to advertise his new one by putting 4 chapters of a new book with no context in the middle of this one adios.